Reviews for Dancing in the Dark
m chapter 3 . 4/16/2016
what's PWP? you keep using it but the only pwp familiar with means porn without plot, and I don't think this is a pwp fic xD
Aaliyah Rose 13 chapter 1 . 4/3/2016
You are an amazing writer, I love all of your stories! The first time I read Dancing in the Dark was 6 years ago and I know that you'll probably never see my review but this is honestly my favourite story on Fanfiction. I really hope that you return and write some more!
Guest chapter 7 . 3/27/2016
Omg omg omg omg this fic was like everything i wanted. I was actually rewatching this episode yesterday so this is amazing. And seriously you wrote the characters soooo well and it feels like and sounds like the style of the episodes. Not doing in-depth sex scenes honestly worked in your favor to have it feel more "real" in the sense that much of what you wrote I could imagine on screen in an episode no problem. Seriously the cutest. Loved it. Loved it loved it.
more.blood chapter 7 . 3/24/2016
this was actually amazing was not expecting alot I was just like scrolling throught stuff and I saw this and was like eh BUT A PARAGRAPH IN AND I WAS OBSESSED YOU HAVE A GIFT THIS IS JUST WOW

Thumbs up 10/10 5 stars
xXOceanXx chapter 7 . 3/23/2016
I absolutely loved this story. It was such a wonderful read. Everyone was in character and the ending was perfect. Thank you so much for writing this!
Anonymous chapter 7 . 3/9/2016
I've read a lot of Zutara fanfic, but this is one of the best. Well done.
DarkrosePsique chapter 7 . 3/4/2016
Amei!XD sua ff é simplesmente adoravel de se ler, ah e o romance...
Muito boa sua escrita e a momtagem da ff, dos personagens e da trama. Parabens pelo seu talento!
Fiquei apenas com um gostinho de "quero mais", saber o que ocorreu apos a partida da gaang, como o Sokka reagiu ao ver sua irma aos beijos com o principe jerkbender! Kkkkkkk
E quando eles finalmente se reecontraram? Como foi entre Zuko e a Katara? E apos o fim da guerra?
Ahh tantas perguntas...vou definitivamente sentier saudades desse romance zutara...X\
Mais uma vez parabens e obrigado pela inesquecivel ff ;) beijos e abraços.
AHH chapter 7 . 2/24/2016
This. Fic. Was. AMAZING! I LOVE how all of the characters were IN CHARACTER and the whole thing was just one big pile of genius!
There were many funny moments which caused me to laugh a lot... but I'll admit this last chapter made me cry more than a bit :')
But DAMN Zuko's last line was priceless! And I just LOVE how in the end you used "The Tales of Ba Sing Se: Zuko and Katara"... THE FEELS!
I swear I was expecting a cheesy-fluffy-OOC-funky-fic, yet it was anything but!
Please get bored more often so you can write more of masterpieces like this one!
miguce chapter 6 . 2/26/2016
i forgot to mention.. the ending lines were awesome.. it gave me a nice laugh.. never going to feel the same hearing those lines again..
miguce chapter 7 . 2/26/2016
would have liked closure with jin and song.. a nice story overall.. enjoyed it
Guest chapter 7 . 2/20/2016
This is a fricking amazing story and I wish there was more to it but there's not and that makes me mad bug still utterly amazed by you're writing skills
Guest chapter 1 . 1/20/2016
I like where this is going.
wimmer511 chapter 7 . 1/16/2016
Loved it. Very entertaining. There were several parts where I was laughing out loud. For example any time Toph flashed her status to get into the tea shop. That was always funny. The moment Zuko first jumped out of the tree to teach her to dance, also had me chuckling. I loved Sokka's protectiveness, especially when he found her sleeping under the tree and carried her home. Loved the scene where Zuko's telling Katara she's not ugly. The fight (so funny-all of it, including the not ugly, dance step, urge to take her to back room or broom closet,) the fall, him holding her, Uncle's reaction and Jin and Song. And the scene that followed with his sore back, her healing him, falling on top of each other again and him getting hit in the head with the door. That entire section could've come off very contrived, especially with falling twice, but it was very well done and I loved it. Part of the reason I think it worked so well is because people were betting on them and sense they wanted to refute that anything was happening of course they would fall on each other twice. Haha! I enjoyed the day after the first dance lessons where he was dancing around the tea shop and I thought his excitement to go again and again despite whatever fight they'd had was adorable. The kisses were so cute, especially with his realization that she found him as Zuko attractive and didn't think him as the blue spirit should use a burn as an excuse if Zuko didn't. I've read other stories, that were great, where his scar made him something of a pariah to women, and I hated that. I think your story hit the nail on the head with all the girls and women crushing on him, following him, trying to sneak peeks of him in the bath, coming from all over to see him, grabbing his bum, etc. It felt much more realistic to me than women only wanting him because he was Prince Zuko. I enjoyed the festival and the black mask under the blue mask made me laugh. Although I'll admit that I thought Katara was a bit harsh with him, I was so pleased that she apologized at the end. And the end was perfect. Uncle jabbing him and him opening his arms to her that she immediately went into. I'm glad it wasn't a big drawn out make up scene. They just forgave each other. That was the best. I'm sure there were other things I loved that I'm forgetting to mention, but just know that I found your story to be a real gem, mostly light and fun, like the show, and I will be looking at your other stories now too. Thanks so much for sharing!
CurrentlyFalling chapter 7 . 12/17/2015
This story was honestly one of the best fanfictions I have read in a long time. It didn't feel short and it didn't feel long; it was the perfect length to keep me captivated the entire time. You kept the characters in character while still adding your own flare to it; well done!
Azul Elena chapter 7 . 11/30/2015
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