| Reviews for All Fair in |
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   KeeperofDarkShadows chapter 4 . 10/23/2006 .It. Absolutely FANTASTIC work! Your description is fabulous. |
| TheShadowCat chapter 4 . 10/23/2006 *prod*prod*poke* Just making sure you're working on the next chapter. How to end? You could just let it end like the movie and leave him on the train. |
| kbluesmom chapter 4 . 10/23/2006 This is good! YOu had me from the first chappie. Wil be awaiting the rest of the story. Constructive criticism.. Maybe he should eventually remove his mask for her.."My choice.." he might say. Other than that..as soon as this is finished it's going into my favorites! |
| Kryss LaBryn chapter 4 . 10/23/2006 Very well-written! I loved the whole paragraph of "The moon was hiding behind clouds..." Fantastic stuff! Er, one thought: I'm guessing that it's humidity that's supposed to be envelopping them as they enter the bathroom, not humility? Heh... Can't wait to see the rest of this! Cheers! -Kryss |
| Kryss LaBryn chapter 3 . 10/23/2006 "I hope it was still coherently interesting." Indeed it was! Thanks! Off to Chapter 4... |
| Khoumery chapter 3 . 10/21/2006 This story is fantastic! Really enjoying it - I look forward to the next instalment *hinthint* |
| TheShadowCat chapter 3 . 10/21/2006 You've still got my interest, so please continue. |
| Ophelia chapter 3 . 10/21/2006 Oh! I'm so glad you're continuing this. Please do continue soon. |
| princess moon shadow chapter 3 . 10/20/2006 I loved it! Are you kidding? You are like shakesphere compared to me! |
| Pumpkinator chapter 3 . 10/20/2006 I think it's particularly effective how you have the fight happen after Evey passes out, so you only see the effects afterward. I thought it was pretty clever of her to slice her own throat, actually. V would agree if he weren't so scared for her life. I'm loving this story, can't wait for the continuation! |
| VveritasV chapter 3 . 10/20/2006 Whew. You scared me in chapter 2. I feel much better now. This is a great story and you are an excellent writer. |
| Ana chapter 3 . 10/20/2006 Fantastic fic!...great new storyline. Looking forward to what happens next! :) |
| LSR-7 chapter 1 . 10/20/2006 The begining was a little confusing at first, but not so much, it kind of shows the chaotic nature of what happened. Very interesting, I'm enjoying it so far. |
| catherine chapter 3 . 10/20/2006 self-indulgent? I can't wait for more! |
| Belmont-Bellamy chapter 3 . 10/20/2006 Brilliant and no, the pacing wasn't too ragged, rather it gave it the angst and uncertainity both characters seemed to be feeling. Looking forward to the next chapter...keep up the good work! |