Reviews for All Fair in
too lazy chapter 3 . 10/20/2006
Love it more please
Belmont-Bellamy chapter 2 . 10/20/2006
Fantastic... very dark, very gritty...great. Keep going
mistude chapter 2 . 10/19/2006
OMG! Keep going please this story is really great...I'm loving it please keep going...
CiceroGuided chapter 2 . 10/17/2006
GAH! More! and soon!

~Dannie
TheShadowCat chapter 2 . 10/16/2006
Is this the end? Is there more planned? You didn't state one way or another, so I'm curious.
JackHawksmoor chapter 2 . 10/15/2006
I like your Evey. She sounds like the real thing. I like the way V and Evey are having an interaction completely over the head of the guy holding the knife. Strong charecterization, interesting storyline. You also have a tendancy to use unexpected adjectives to paint sharp pictures about your charecters' physical and emotional states. It shows a little extra effort, and makes for a refreshing read.
Tanja chapter 2 . 10/15/2006
Wonderful. I really like how you have captured the characters and the rythm of V's speech. But you are not going to let Evey die, right? RIGHT? :-)
shades-children chapter 2 . 10/14/2006
I really like what you're doing here. Please continue! (How else will we know what happens?)
Christine22 chapter 2 . 10/13/2006
Oh! This is quite different. Didn't expect the ending of this chapt at all. I like what you've done with V's subtle behaviour here. Looking forward to the next chapt.
Too Lazy chapter 2 . 10/13/2006
Wicked mate do keep up the great work i love it V and Freedom Forever!
GladePheonix chapter 2 . 10/12/2006
Yikes! That was intense. Interesting plot spin, and the characterization is pretty good. I think it could use a bit more background - at the moment it feels like a void with just these three, or even jsut V and Evey. Either way, though, it works, and I enjoyed it. Please do finish it.
Storm chapter 2 . 10/12/2006
Very evil! Great chapter!

Please,update soon.
Storm chapter 1 . 10/12/2006
Very good idea!

Interesting and different!

Please, continue.
VveritasV chapter 2 . 10/12/2006
What?
Pumpkinator chapter 2 . 10/12/2006
Gah! That's an evil place to leave it off. I love how the emotions just jumble and crash into each other, and all the chaos outside is nothing compared to what's going on inside.

And I know I'm not the only person reading this :D Please keep writing, you're wonderful.
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