Reviews for Nebertcher
ExtremeRainbowRaiderPrincess chapter 13 . 9/15/2009
This is a wonderful story. You should write more stories for the Tomb Raider section like this one. :) Great job!
MysticGypsyGirl chapter 13 . 5/16/2009
The plot was amazing, it kept me on my toes the whole time!
p-UnKeR chapter 13 . 6/17/2001
very very nice...just a couple of misspellings that kinda whacked me up at first (like 'threw' instead of 'through' or 'manor' instead of 'manner') but hey, it was nothing big- if an idiot such as myself figured it out, anybody can! overall, i liked it...
Zoey Komatsuzaki chapter 13 . 6/16/2001
Hey awesome chapter! It's totally like a screen play. If you want just a wee bit of constructive criticism, you might want to have someone read and revise it for you. Just so the story will make a little more sense cuz sometimes the sentences were run together. But that's only editorially (Is that a word?) speaking. lol Other than that phenomenal story! keep Writing! Later Days and Much love, ~*~*Zoey*~*~
Zoey Komatsuzaki chapter 1 . 6/16/2001
Hey, great intro! Seems like it will be an amazing story. Can't wait to read the rest of it. Laterz, ~*~*Zoey*~*~
Star Catcher chapter 13 . 6/16/2001
I thought the story was very original. I hope you will have time to expand on your story. Keep writing.
jim chapter 1 . 6/16/2001
hi slay girl i like your story keep at writing your pretty good