|Reviews for Last Move|
| Amefist chapter 1 . 9/19
| Princess.B.Saber31 chapter 1 . 8/5
I laughed so hard I cried
| DragonWriterZZ chapter 1 . 7/28
Very funny! Had me laughing from the start
| Jbu96 chapter 1 . 7/25
This made me laugh so hard! And it was really cute at the dame time x3
| Maya-Hime chapter 1 . 5/25
HAHAHAHA! THAT WAS AWESOME! LOVE THEM SO MUCH!
ps. Love the naruhina and nejiten ship! haha
| Lils chapter 1 . 5/7
Omg you had me screaming with that last line! Love it!
| whattadragg chapter 1 . 1/4
hahaha this was hilarious
| SakuraEgg chapter 1 . 11/16/2015
*~Awwww...~* So Kawaii-Desu its so very pretty desu when you will make another one desu
| Sea Wan River chapter 1 . 5/3/2015
Loved it (:
| Calliecature chapter 1 . 11/8/2014
wow, that is... very sexy of Shikamaru. Two words I'd never thought to associate in one sentence.
| RealDiePie chapter 1 . 10/17/2014
Hey... It's me again... (stalker much, right? Hehe...) I can't say I didn't warn you, though. My comments shall become something usual in your inbox. Well, there isn't much to say, is there? You already know I loved this almost as much as the other one, so... This review is basically to remind you to keep writing. Wouldn't want to keep your fans waiting for more now, would you?
| Rose-Aki chapter 1 . 3/27/2014
Perfect way to describe it like Shikamaru would. Loved it :)
| videogamenerd101 chapter 1 . 3/9/2014
Oh God this is amazing. So freaking hilarious. I LOVE IT. xD
| temari4689 chapter 1 . 12/17/2013
I thought that metaphor was perfect. I feel like your stories say just enough to place responsibility on the readers to come up with their own imaginative scenes of what's happening, and I love that. And, for the third time, your ending was great.
I liked the buildup to the revealing of his 'battle techniques' too.
| TheCrazyGurlz chapter 1 . 10/15/2013
Oh. Em. Gee.
I'm blushinggggg XDDD That was a masterpiece you writer you :P