Reviews for Last Move
fmalover07 chapter 1 . 1/4
hahaha this was hilarious
SakuraEgg chapter 1 . 11/16/2015
*~Awwww...~* So Kawaii-Desu its so very pretty desu when you will make another one desu
Sea Wan River chapter 1 . 5/3/2015
Loved it (:
Calliecature chapter 1 . 11/8/2014
wow, that is... very sexy of Shikamaru. Two words I'd never thought to associate in one sentence.
RealDiePie chapter 1 . 10/17/2014
Hey... It's me again... (stalker much, right? Hehe...) I can't say I didn't warn you, though. My comments shall become something usual in your inbox. Well, there isn't much to say, is there? You already know I loved this almost as much as the other one, so... This review is basically to remind you to keep writing. Wouldn't want to keep your fans waiting for more now, would you?
Rose-Aki chapter 1 . 3/27/2014
Perfect way to describe it like Shikamaru would. Loved it :)
videogamenerd101 chapter 1 . 3/9/2014
Oh God this is amazing. So freaking hilarious. I LOVE IT. xD
temari4689 chapter 1 . 12/17/2013
I thought that metaphor was perfect. I feel like your stories say just enough to place responsibility on the readers to come up with their own imaginative scenes of what's happening, and I love that. And, for the third time, your ending was great.
I liked the buildup to the revealing of his 'battle techniques' too.
TheCrazyGurlz chapter 1 . 10/15/2013
Oh. Em. Gee.

I'm blushinggggg XDDD That was a masterpiece you writer you :P
Kkornelia chapter 1 . 9/18/2013
hahahahaha. logic in the middle and sexy in the end. XD
goldspears chapter 1 . 5/7/2013
Ooh, that was hot! Sexy. I liked it. ShikaTema is like a pairing I love but can't seem to write. Ah, well whatever, at least I can read them.
jayfeather97 chapter 1 . 4/14/2013
random chapter 1 . 4/4/2013
The ending was brilliant! Loved this
SuperbOink chapter 1 . 11/23/2012
Shikamaru topping is definitely hnnngggg-worthy. Very very delicious.
CarmineCoffee chapter 1 . 9/30/2012
Nicely written, I like the witty sentence towards the end. We all know Shikamaru is devious.
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