Reviews for Rivals
vanilice chapter 5 . 10/21/2006
hyuvk hyuck... nice

love it
Angstic Articuno chapter 1 . 10/19/2006
Three hours of battling? Wow, that must've really tired out Typhlosion...

I think it's pitiful not pityful, in the last line, but I oculd be wrong...

A couple of spelling mistakes, but I won't point them out. ( I see quite a few writers who don't like that)

Very nice battle, in all. It's good that you don't describe tje entire 3-hour battle here cuz that would really have put some people off, but it would be nice to watch the whole sequence...

-angstic articuno-
Chibi Tetra chapter 5 . 10/17/2006
Nicely done! Kamon seemed to change a little fast, but I guess it could happen.

Please make more stories 8D
AshK1980 chapter 1 . 10/17/2006
Good start to this story! Anyway great work!



P.S. Sorry for the lateness of this Chapter One Review.
AshK1980 chapter 5 . 10/17/2006
What do you mean this is the end? The story is still listed as In Progress. Anyway great story all and all! I like it!


AshK1980 chapter 4 . 10/17/2006
This chapter does not suck at all! I like it!

Keep up the good work!


AshK1980 chapter 4 . 10/14/2006
Good work! Please update soon!


AshK1980 chapter 3 . 10/14/2006
Good work! I like it! Keep up the good work!


vanilice chapter 4 . 10/13/2006
hm... rivallovecareconfusion

Wa.. I Love it so much.. fave'd

i want a dratini in the story

hehe... just a favor :) It's okay if you don't

added to C2 stories.. o.O
Chibi Tetra chapter 4 . 10/13/2006
NO WAI. This was really well done! I can't wait for the rest
RocketVeteran chapter 3 . 10/13/2006
This is well-written and I'm enjoying it so far...please keep it up!

You forgot to change Kamon's name at one point, in Chapter 2, I think. Just thought I'd tell you in case you didn't notice. )
Chibi Tetra chapter 3 . 10/12/2006
Emotional breakdown! Can't wait for the next chapter! 8D
Chibi Tetra chapter 2 . 10/12/2006
Aww... great job! You really do kind of learn something..
Chibi Tetra chapter 1 . 10/12/2006
Yay! A Pokemon Gold/Silver/Crystal story
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