Reviews for Promise
jcampbellohten chapter 1 . 5/8/2015
That's nice.
wynnsy chapter 1 . 12/25/2011
Oh, I like this story very much. I wish there was more but being short, it's really poignant.

Did you come up with the verse itself or is it a translated poem?

It's very nice and a pun.

You came up with a well-written, believable, and impressionable first meeting between the two. I imagine Hisana's singing in public in order to find Rukia and make it easier for Rukia to find/notice her (especially if he used to sing it to her as a lullaby).

I wonder if Ukitake knew of her performances...
great gospel chapter 1 . 6/5/2010
Lovely. I love the change we see in Byakuya, and all because of one woman from the Rukongai. Nicely done.

Lisilgirl chapter 1 . 4/5/2008
That was amazing. Really. He actually has a heart?
KawaiiChappy chapter 1 . 10/13/2006
great. is it a one-shot?
ayame213 chapter 1 . 10/13/2006
I also have my own wild speculations on Bya and Hisa's first meeting and I think you've written this out quite nicely. I especially liked the begining, I think you captured Bya's personality really well! Good job! _
Alaena Night chapter 1 . 10/12/2006
This is awesome! You caught Byakuya's character perfectly, and this is definitely a cute and believable way for Byakuya and Hisana to meet up. Very well-written. Many thumbs up to you!