Reviews for Delusions of Bliss
lemon-rind chapter 5 . 3/12/2014
Thanks. Good job.
Psychocatlover911 chapter 3 . 7/15/2013
tsk tsk tsk...Hinata, you naughty little girl. Keep up the good work ;)
Ginger Lord chapter 5 . 11/27/2012
I ! I'm a guilty Yuri fan but this one had a good story I love ur writing and disclamers teehee :D
Aki666 chapter 5 . 2/15/2011
I loved this story even though I didn't think of pairing Sakura&Hinata as a couple, it was or should I say it a good pairing in the yuri department.

Well just wanted to let you know and I look foward to finishing your other stories!

Ja Ne.
DJ chapter 1 . 12/21/2010
LOL! Gosh, I can't believe Sakura would use an excus like that!
tik tok chapter 5 . 5/22/2010
your story freakin rocked
White Night Dragon chapter 5 . 5/11/2010
I swear, everytime you pair Hinata with someone, it just seems so natural and right for both of them. I really like it. And to your current story... the only way I can imagine it could be better is if you would end it with Sakura and Hinata going to their bed, mentioning something about that they should make use of the last night they don't have to explain anything to anyone and just spend their next few hours with... you know the rest. Anyway, thank you for your story, and I'm looking forward for another. I just really hope you pair Hinata again soon (and, probably, it doesn't even matter with whom)! :)
zero 2362 chapter 2 . 2/26/2010
ok the first part of the cover story to get them in was a little weak but the reast of it was very good. I especially liked the way you played on the Hyuga clans obssession with outward appearences. I also liked the way you got the two kissing so early in the fic. I could see it coming a mile off but that dosent mean I didnt enjoy it. you have written another entertaining chapter and you have maintained a natural feel to the characters behaviour and personallities. Well done
zero 2362 chapter 1 . 2/26/2010
ok normally i wouldnt go near this pairing but the way you have set it up has captured my interest. im gonna reserve judjment on this one untill i have read more but the first chapter was very interesting
FoxyNoodles chapter 5 . 7/30/2009
that was yay :)
Bothworlds chapter 1 . 7/1/2009
supperior
Rise-N Seraphim chapter 5 . 5/31/2009
Cute story! I enjoyed it, I also like your writing style.
Nykonyx chapter 5 . 4/27/2009
Wow. *squeals delightedly* xD

So, the ending was really the beginning?

Well, who cares about my stupid comments?

What I meant to say was:

WOW, SUPA KEWL!

I would probably squeal for more, but yeah. Another time, maybe?

AWESOMe fanfic anyways!

-Akira
person1 chapter 5 . 12/29/2008
good times... good times. That was a good story your a talented writer i liked the plot. )
Rabukurafuto chapter 5 . 10/28/2008
That was sweet. I wish you did end with "...and the two had found their true happiness in the delusions of bliss", but that's just me. Another brief fight, but I wasn't expecting much from Miyatomi in the first place. I really liked Miyuki though and was glad everything ended happily for her. I have to say though, absolutely everything about this story is completely eclipsed by the brilliant Deluded Dreams and the Fragile Heart, but that's a review for another day...

Oh, and I forgot to say anything about Junai's name. It would be 十内, meaning "ten within". Kasho the Demon Fist would be 魔拳の歌昇 (Maken no Kashou).
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