Reviews for Beyond the Sea of Time |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I do hope you update soon but sance you where talking about 9/11 at the top of the page and that was almost three years ago I highly dout it still its a good story so far |
![]() ![]() ![]() u hace just GOT 2 keep going! |
![]() ![]() ![]() You'd better hurry before I start sending you email after email all bearing the same message: Hurry up! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very interesting, I'm intrigued! Please continue :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() cool |
![]() ![]() ![]() I liked it but you maybe could elaborate on Harry's actions while Sirius is telling the story? maybe? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, I hope you do continue this. I like it, and the absence of spelling errors was excellent. It's interesting, and I wonder wether this stone is the same Harry once saw? Hmmm . . .hurry, please. |
![]() ![]() goooood story so far,hurry and get the chapters up already! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like it alot however you need to mention Lily more. I know that you will eventually. But there was only one conversation with her and it was fairly brief. That and you might want to include the details about some of their panks just to add a little flavor to your writing. Anyways just some ideas. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey, Aira! Well, obviously I've already read this, but I was just checking over it, and it's still really good ). Also, I was reading the reviews, and a little message to Rogue15 - why do you think Lily was in Ravenclaw? I've actually read an interview with Jo Rowling that said Lily was a Gryffindor. |
![]() ![]() Great story! Continue soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ohhhhh... Is it what I think it is? Really really good start on what hopefully is a great, grand, and long story! Hurry up with the next chapter, I can't wait to find out what happens! keep up the good work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was great! Pleeeeeeeeeeeeez please please write more. ~I~ of Me&I |
![]() ![]() This was very well written, you kept to the Marauder's personalities very well, please KEEP ADDING! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good! I've imagined Harry and Sirius having conversations like this too, but I've never written one down. Good work! Please write more! |