Reviews for Slow Heat
SnowPrincess144 chapter 14 . 8/20
Hi, long time reader of your work! So, there is no link for the uncut chapters on your profile for both Slow Heat and Kiss of Fire and while I can read Slow Heat on AO3 uncut, I can’t say the same for Kiss of Fire because it’s not even there. I really do love both of these stories and love the juicy smut scenes! If you can, whenever you read this, reply me back with link to Kiss of Fire uncut chapters! If you’re able to, that is!
udkudk chapter 39 . 8/18
Great fic
Darthor777 chapter 14 . 8/26/2021
You got to be kidding me! you are going to far! This is so against the rating! You my friend are a PERVERT!
Darthor777 chapter 13 . 8/26/2021
Hey, you freaking rated it T, what the heck are you complaining about!
Darthor777 chapter 17 . 8/26/2021
The T rating is supposed to have no adult content or suggestive themes whatsoever! The only reason I still read is because every thing else seems interesting. If only you would make a Zutara story that does not have any suggestive themes you would be an outstanding writer. But it seems that 90% of the population is perverts!
CatKim chapter 35 . 2/14/2021
this ending. even though i cried, it fitted perfectly
Guest chapter 39 . 10/6/2020
Ahhh this was great. I wish I was able to read the uncut version in it’s entirety. I have to be honest, the original ending pained my heart too much. So for this alternate ending, I am so very grateful.
Dexaf chapter 39 . 9/19/2020
ohhh i very love this story. first of all i don't mind about POV and feel the way the person about event they have. and the story was good and perfect but it's was sad obviously when Katara is death.

well I don't say the first ending was bad but i prefer to the second and happy ending. although it's sometimes good to read a bad ending to see another choice after the ending.

well thanks for make a great story and i will look forward to the sequel and another Zutara story from your stories. good job
Laurelian-chan chapter 13 . 6/4/2020
Saying you made it more realistic is not the same as putting up an actual Trigger or Content Warning about sexual violence. This is really not ok, I know it's year later but please edit the A/N to put a TN
Laurelian-chan chapter 9 . 6/4/2020
okay 'water wench?' that's so OOC, I realise the fandom has been throwing these insults around as much as the ridiculous nickname 'Sparky' but at least the latter sort of makes sense even though it's not the smartest:/
Laurelian-chan chapter 3 . 6/4/2020
I gotta say, thoroughly enjoyed Jin being completely pushed aside.
ataecina chapter 1 . 1/31/2020
I am not good with reading 1st person anymore... I’ve become a disgusting literature snob. However I can see myself really getting into this story. As a bonus, this might break my of my new and unsettling personal issue
LunaticCat chapter 34 . 6/17/2019
Are you kidding me.
2:42 a.m. and I read all this fic to find out that Katara die.

Sorry fo english
fireandwaterr chapter 39 . 8/13/2018
I have no words for this fanfic! It is a masterpiece! (I am gonna try to forget the first ending though. It was way too sad and the second one was way better)
Gaby.enoza chapter 1 . 10/2/2017
you have no idea how much I've been searching this fic after three months looking I finally found it and I can't be happier!
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