|Reviews for Slow Heat|
| Keytchtee chapter 39 . 3/26
I rather liked the happy ending as well, even though I prefered the less happy one(You tore my heart out, bustard! ;-) ).
One the whole this has been a well-written and easily-enjoyed ride. Good night/morning/day to you as well, and thank you for the good time. Of to read Kiss of Fire next.
| Keytchtee chapter 35 . 3/26
I'll make a review of this chapter(and everything before it) first, and then read the Alternate Ending, so you'll get two reviews from me on this story.
I can't help but feel that it started off rather shakily and forced. It did evolve though, and by the rough middle it was bloody brilliant. Few stories have actually gotten me this engaged, and I got some massive enjoyment of it.
I'd like to add: a harsh, but brilliant move to kill Katara. Few authors would ever do that(I know Brian Jaques does it in one of his books), and it really gives you an emotional rocking.
My final verdict is probably 9/10. It started a bit iffy(reason why it's not a 10/10), but soon enough became solid, engaging, and above all, truly realistic in character portrayal. Yet another fanfic that shows that Zutara is infinately more interesting than Cannon. :-)
| erisol chapter 1 . 2/19
Yeah its good so far. I didn't think Katara would let Suko join the group that easily. She usually will be the last one to accept him. But hey its only the first chapter so there probably is a little twist.
| cyathula chapter 39 . 1/24
Amazing. The alternate ending was so perfect, I just can't even speak right now. I'm so glad Aang was finally able to be at peace at the end. I'm so glad I'll be able to go to bed content and with a smile on my face.
| cyathula chapter 3 . 1/22
I just discovered this story! This is going to cause many a late night, I predict. Zuko's night on the town with Toph was so perfect, I loved it!
| Ophelia's Flower chapter 4 . 12/14/2013
I'm sorry for freaking out, but oh my god when I saw the name of this chapter, it being a line from Hamlet's To Be Or Not To Be soliloquy, I fangirled so hard. I'm a huge Shakespeare freak, and I adore Hamlet more than life (hence the pen name/username).
Anyways, terrific story! Your writing is quite spectacular.
| MsRAWRMUFFINS chapter 39 . 11/30/2013
I liked how your correct on the avatar spirit and Aang's spirit being separate beings, since that has shown in the recent Korra episode. I really enjoyed this story, I honestly would have loved this to be shown as an animation. It would be so great. :)
| Shadowhunter69 chapter 1 . 11/26/2013
| kawii.kiwis chapter 3 . 11/25/2013
I love how you turned Zuko's date with Jin into a night out with Toph with out making it seem all pedophile-like. They were just friends hanging out :)
| MofoBanana chapter 14 . 11/4/2013
I've read M rated contents and some aren't even as hot as this... THIS IS M RATED YO! LOLZ but poor Zuko, Katara is getting on my nerves a little.
| EarthFae chapter 14 . 10/20/2013
You could be everything to me.
*claps* Congrat, Zuko, you FINALLY say the right thing for once. Seriously that was a very romantic line that made me go 'aww' and such. It feels right that their passion should come from a fight. I thought you were going to have them be more friendly before that, but this fits the story more and their characters. Now, of course is Katara's problems with tradition, patriarchy and all that other bullshit. *sigh*
| EarthFae chapter 13 . 10/20/2013
Oh, I figured when I first watched the episode that Hama had probably been raped in prison. That is what happens to young women and some men during wartime. I think you made the episode more realistic like seeing corpses and only one survivor instead of healthy and a alive people. Why would Hama be feeding and taking care of them anyway? I love the touch of him putting the flower on her pillow it was sweet. I wonder if you left a hole so Hama could come back. She is actually one of my favorite one episode only characters, so I wouldn't mind seeing her again
| EarthFae chapter 12 . 10/20/2013
Oh, the sexual tension! Zuko, you peeping tom this sin't the 50's. Be a good boy and get your water tribe porn off the internet like everyone else.
| EarthFae chapter 11 . 10/19/2013
I congratulate you, Kin. Painted Lady is my most hated episode in the Avatar series, even more than the great divide and I thought it had too many plotholes, but here it makes much more sense with Zuko's logic. I like the subtle detail of him noticing she is uncomfortable, proving he does notice her. Also, nice Sokka and Zuko friendship moment. They should have spared in the series! I like zutara, but I also like Zuko's interactions with the rest of the group as well, gives the story a more fleshed out feel, than just another zutara story.
| EarthFae chapter 10 . 10/19/2013
Oh, I love the little bit where Iroh and Toph dance, seems like something she would totally do. Sad to see Iroh leave, wasn't expecting that, but it is probably for the best in terms of the story and does make sense. Oh, and Zuko and Katara need to work on anger management. My therapist's office offers them and I would love to sign them both up for them at this point. Zuko would probablly do wonders with a therapist if he opened up enough