Reviews for What Should Have Been
abcdoll3 chapter 1 . 10/25/2006
Shadow Of The Night113 chapter 1 . 10/20/2006
I loved it! Although, if it was the real ending to the epiisode, I doubt that it would actually have the word "Damn" in it. But I still loved it! Very cute story!
WWMTgirl chapter 1 . 10/20/2006
well, not perfect, but who am i to judge? it's good enough to sell, at least.
simplegrl007 chapter 1 . 10/17/2006
Okay, I thought I had reviewed this earlier but I didn't. I'm an idiot, it's not news to anybody...

It was so sweet! Even though my cable is stupid and I never got to see the episode, I could picture it and it's so cute!
Xweetok chapter 1 . 10/14/2006

i'm in the twilight zone...
Rodidor chapter 1 . 10/13/2006
really sweet
CharmedNightSkye chapter 1 . 10/13/2006
Ah yes that scene drove me crazy! I hate how they all just "lost" their memory of the events afterwards. Gr. the ice crystal was cute though. Yah for fluffiness!
LittleGothGirl13 chapter 1 . 10/13/2006
I liked it alot. That is so a better ending than the real one. I hope to read more DP stories from you in the future.

Keep up the good writing. :)


P.S. Read and Review my DP stories too please.
AcousticMaiden chapter 1 . 10/13/2006
Aw! That's so cute! Like you, I was hoping to see a bit more DxS action in Urban Jungle, so this really hit the spot. Keep writing! You have knack and talent for it!