Reviews for A minor drawback
CHJ chapter 1 . 6/15/2009
Hahahaha! That was one of the best things ever. I like how dramatic you make it yet at the same time, so not at all. Loved it.
The Famous Fire Lady M chapter 1 . 4/29/2009
LOL!

That was epic.

Jac Bauer is win.
1wingangel chapter 1 . 8/18/2007
Never seen 24, but this is awesome. Love it. :3
Wesker Chick chapter 1 . 1/18/2007
Very awsome. I really did enjoy the paragraph about the sky. In fact I think I read a book recently that had almost...I stress the word ALMOST...the exact same begenning.

Your's was just way better and much funnier!
Ginkyofu13 chapter 1 . 11/10/2006
AHAHAHAHAHAH! Wrong daughter! that is so wrong!
Skarto chapter 1 . 10/15/2006
Aw, I bet Saddler was ecstatic when they finally got the right girl! Good job ;).
Burningbridges chapter 1 . 10/14/2006
Wow... Wow... And so I don't go on saying that for several more minutes, and get locked in the library, wow!

Seriously, seriously funny! I think the librarians hate it when I read anything this funny, 'cause I start laughing hysterically, and I laugh like a hyena.

Anyway, brilliant!

You have a deviant art? No kidding, me too... In fact, most people I know on DA have a fanfiction. Weird...
sylphstarwind chapter 1 . 10/13/2006
Haha, I love how you make it sound totally serious, all the while rambling about strange and random things, and pointing out oddities in the game. Well, I've never watched 24, but this could be entertaining nonetheless.