Reviews for Yume no Naka ni wa
Screaming-Fires chapter 1 . 7/6/2013
For some reason I didn't quite get why he was bleeding... and stuff. o.o
Averial Flames chapter 1 . 1/20/2012
you really do know how to make me cry from reading your sad stories :'( *cries*
JoanIncarnate chapter 1 . 10/5/2011
tifa chapter 1 . 9/16/2011

sweet but cruel!

when will sasuke come back to naruto?

JlovesGaara chapter 1 . 8/29/2011
Wow! One of the best one-shots I have ever read! *sniffle* gonna cry now... great story.
TarynCasey chapter 1 . 1/28/2011
That was completely and utterly awesome. Just great.
pppeppermint chapter 1 . 8/29/2010
Wow!I wonder why I am so late found this fic!

Love it!
C00kies.AND.CreAm chapter 1 . 7/17/2009

GOOD ONE! Makes me wanna cry. XD
kkm-crazyfan24 chapter 1 . 5/26/2009
why did sasuke leave!
5Angel chapter 1 . 4/13/2009
I love it. Melancholic yet hopeful I love the softness of it and the aching in Naruto that could only be matched by Sasuke's tenderness and brilliance...

And I absolutely agree! He better make it up by being a damn good hubby LOL
LURVEuALL chapter 1 . 3/26/2009
aww how sweet

it was very sad

but it was still sweet
Mrs Hatake Itachi chapter 1 . 11/29/2008
Nice story! Sad but nice! But then again at least Sasuke said to wait for him.
pilot-anubis chapter 1 . 3/2/2008
Okay. Good idea for a plot but poorly executed. Your sex scene is just one big mass of horrible cliches. I couldn't take any of it seriously and unlike the rest of the reviewers, I did NOT find this story cute. If this was a parody, I probably would have liked it. But it isn't and for the love of politically-correctness, say "ANUS"! An anus is a ring of muscles, not "flower petals"! No one can break in two from having intercourse no matter which hole is being used. If Naruto or any man "mewed" during sex it would be because their Dominator told them to. "Ancient mating dance"? Are you serious? Sex or making love is more than adequate for the eyes of teeny-boppers everywhere. I think what did it for me was the fact you used "panties" as the thesaurical term for Naruto's underwear. Which is leading me to believe you plagiarized someone else's story. If this really is your own story (I highly doubt it), then I suggest you buy gay porn to further educate yourself in how gay men really have sex. It is not, I repeat, not flowery or sweet. That's it. I have nothing further to say.
Shimaki-33 chapter 1 . 12/27/2007
O.M.G that was so kiwaii!

dose that really mean 'wait for me'?

I'm a sucker for fluff! and this made me cry! love'd it
skizzled-toufu chapter 1 . 12/5/2007
so sad:(
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