Reviews for Try Again
BlackButterfly9 chapter 3 . 5/17/2010
loly. like it!

D keep writing
Zemyx chapter 1 . 2/2/2008
This was funny and sexy.
freakypetachick chapter 4 . 12/11/2007
i love this...keep writing...
The Number VI chapter 4 . 6/17/2007
I love it TOO much! I need more yaoi! _ Please continue it!
NO-ONE-IX chapter 4 . 2/24/2007
Omg these are fun and kinda cute u shouldn't have stopped
AllyIsSpecial chapter 4 . 2/22/2007
wooh! Yaio! and good stuff at that!

*bows down*
waterdragon34912 chapter 4 . 2/15/2007
Hope you continue.
Lady KeyBlade chapter 4 . 1/28/2007
The feather thing was my favorite!

Nice Ending!
Butter fly soup chapter 4 . 12/20/2006
My dear, you have something that I really like. Now, I really do not care if the people are OC, but, now don’t fret, I have to tell this to almost everyone, but please work on punctuation. One more thing: I can pretty much tell when people use spell check, and something you have to do is go over it a few times because even if the word is spelled right, it's not always the word you wanted because the misspelling was closer to a differnt word. Like here you have, "large back dildo." What I think you meant was black, not back. However, you might not have used spell check, now that I re-read things, but you still should check them over.
VirtualLibertine chapter 3 . 12/11/2006
I knew the tooth brush had to belong to someone!
VirtualLibertine chapter 2 . 12/9/2006
I wonder who's tooth brush that is?
Santorino chapter 1 . 11/9/2006
loved it, hurry up, i need more
Smoking Panda chapter 1 . 10/22/2006
WOAH. Hot.

Anxious for more! -
VirtualLibertine chapter 1 . 10/14/2006
So far I like it. Needs more sex, though. Not just forplay.