|Reviews for Beloved|
| Laladria Moonsword chapter 1 . 3/29/2007
Well my little freaky-friend-in-crime...you oviously dont know who i am...but anyway...(ill talk to you at school tomorrow), after reading this story, i found it very interesting, i like your style of writing (though im ashamed to admit i probably havn't read the book i dont recognise the authour) thought what i cannot understand if your use of the lyrics...i feel they take away from the emotive aspect of the story some what...mayb a bit more story to try and compensate for the large portion that the lyrics take up. Good Luck with future writing. Laladria Moonsword...and yes if you have read my profile you may call me "Jelly"...but only for personal use...formally just call me Laladria Moonsword...lol
| little-miss-evilness chapter 1 . 3/15/2007
| insignia chapter 1 . 12/1/2006
I liked your snippet, thank you! It tied in well with the way MR wrote her two dragon series. I often thought it a pity that she had to kill off one of her best characters - and she did the same in her next series too! Best wishes for your future writings.