Reviews for Under the Cherryblossom
royed lover chapter 1 . 12/2/2012
I like this story and I hope I can read more stories like these
Guest chapter 1 . 11/25/2012
Nice story
Tell you friend to make MORE!
AlchemyFreak0218 chapter 1 . 8/22/2010
XD LOLZ...Yeah...lets go with that...XD FUNNY ED-O! put more details in the lemon...otherwize...freakin AWESOME!
Alliecard chapter 1 . 6/24/2007
Let's go with that! That's really good!
TheSlashingQueen chapter 1 . 5/1/2007
that was awsome i'v read this story like a million times it's just so KAWAII ina a certain way
0kami0chi chapter 1 . 4/6/2007
this is a great storie...i hope you write more
Akira Muratake chapter 1 . 11/21/2006
yah thats the same excuse i always use... "lets go wit that"

*sigh* that was funny
kiba91592 chapter 1 . 11/11/2006
Oh dear. /

Really good fic! xD My critique for your friend: Space the paragraphs out a bit more; they seemed to squished together. And the whole sex scene itself seemed a little too rushed, y'know? Slow things down some and don't be afraid to use lots of detail! :3

But, that's it for now. I try not to critique too much, but sometimes I can't help myself. ;

Like I said, though, it was really really good. Really hot. I was drooling over the PC screen. LOL

Tell your friend to keep up the good work!
Sorakitty chapter 1 . 10/15/2006
me: Ha! Al knew more than Ed did!

Sora: Very short, sweet, and nosebleed inducing! My compliments to the author!
rio chapter 1 . 10/15/2006
KAWAI yo!

Hey, hey...I remembered that I've saw a doujinshi art that really match for this story. ASTRO*BANK made them.

WRITE MORE!
fullmetaldevil chapter 1 . 10/14/2006
Wow that was so cute! More please!
Figment of an Imagination chapter 1 . 10/14/2006
Very Very VERY Kawaii! I love it!
pyroangel649 chapter 1 . 10/14/2006
LOL. That last part was funny.
catwwomen47 chapter 1 . 10/14/2006
lol bravo
Edward elric chapter 1 . 10/14/2006
Nice story
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