|Reviews for Natsumi|
| tay104 chapter 3 . 12/17/2006
pls dotn uz intrnt speeks plzPlease don't use shortcuts like, OMG, for 'Oh my God(gosh wever).' Use grammar and spelling.
Look at the form of writing that other authors use. Post announcements in your profile, also get someone to beta-read, like a friend. Use the forums*coughsearhcough*.
| 3karen3 chapter 1 . 10/16/2006
| Cyndaquil143 chapter 1 . 10/14/2006
Good start. You should try making the chapters longer tho.
| SakuraTeardrop chapter 1 . 10/14/2006
I really like the concept; good job on that and nice start by the way.
| amichka chapter 1 . 10/14/2006
I like the idea, but it's way to short, theres close to no description, and the charaters are rather OOC.
sry for being a critic, but it needs some work.
no hard feelings. please!