Reviews for Sun Faded Curtains
Prettygirls08 chapter 1 . 8/10/2019
I have to say, after Starfire woke up from her coma and she found out everything that happened, I had to stop reading. This broke my heart and messed me up mentally. No, I didn't finish reading the story, but I loved what I did ready. This story was so detailed from the fight scenes, death scenes, emotions, love scenes and all! My godly God man, you know how to write a story!
The voice of all things chapter 44 . 8/19/2018
This was like the read one, get two free of stories! You definitely had 3 stories worth of material woven together in there. Amazing!
Guest chapter 44 . 1/5/2018
So glad it worked out in the end cause I don't even know what I would have done. I was so heartbroken for her I literally cried. But you fixed it all. I just wish there an epilogue lol Loved it!
Guest chapter 41 . 1/5/2018
Can I just say that I've been reading this every chance I get for the last 3 days. But now I'm at chapter 41 and I want to throw my phone. How could you?! *bawls* Sigh. You have 3 chapters to fix this...
Guest chapter 43 . 8/19/2016
That was beautiful. Wow, I feel like i just read through her whole life story. Thanks for the tears my friend that was just refreshing to read. Great fic, wish you the best for everything to come.
mandee3 chapter 30 . 5/18/2014
The end: so cute socutesocute! 3 3 3
animestarz96 chapter 44 . 3/5/2014
Oh...My...Gosh! I love love love this story! it was so great! I would like to see a story about the new trials they face as an adult couple. Ahh it was so great now I'm gonna go raid your other stories!
Wolfgirl212 chapter 44 . 2/17/2014
*sobbing uncontrolably* I. Loved. This.
Guest chapter 1 . 12/29/2013
Kimonos4me chapter 44 . 7/23/2013
Have you ever thought about writing a story about Nightstar? You know a quick epilogue about Nightwing and Starfire in the stages of conceiving and side story about parenthood?
Guest chapter 43 . 6/9/2013
Electricboa chapter 44 . 5/7/2013
This was truly a marvelous story. Your writing style makes great use of imagery and is quite descriptive.

I've read a handful of other novel-length Robin/Starfire stories, and your work has a few unique points that I thought worked quite well. In starting their relationship, I like that it was more initiated on its own, instead of how most stories use a catalyst to bring out their feelings. Having Starfire just bring it up and Robin acknowledge it was good change. Believe it or not, this is the first Teen Titans story I've read with Slade featuring as one of the main villains. I'm not sure if others are wary of writing him, but you did a magnificent job of keeping him insanely brilliant, but also throwing in some of his back-story, something lacking in the TV series.

Finally, there's Tamaran. I don't even know where to begin. You really did well to make us just despise the whole planet by the end of the story. From essentially forcing her to fight her sister, and I was shocked that you really did kill Blackfire off, to constantly using her as a marriage token really worked. I was especially surprised that Galfore actually did it to her the last time, that was something I hadn't seen before.

That being said, there were some things I'm not so sure worked, but it could be just me. The third act, starting after Starfire wakes up from her coma seemed to jump around in time too much. There was a lot that happened in that six month gap that kind of was pushed aside when Starfire went to Gotham. After all, the Titans broke up and we didn't really see how or why. I also didn't quite understand why Robin never really confronted or came to terms with Starfire killing her sister and Slade. Starfire references it, but neither Robin or Batman really resolve it.

When she did get to Gotham, I didn't quite understand how she could really pretend to be Kori Anders, since she has orange skin and glowing green eyes. I might have missed the explanation, but I can't see how no one immediately made the connection and then figured out Dick Grayson and Robin were dating the same girl. I had a similar issue when the Titans were reunited before Starfire left, how people didn't realize that there was a reason Grayson was playing with the titans and Robin was missing.

The part that really threw me was the six year gap. Maybe I'm comparing it too much to the first two acts, but I think too much happened in there to just be skipped, even if they were snippets of their lives. I also think that the whole marriage/break-up happened pretty quickly without much being resolved by the end. I think an epilogue could help in that area, just kind of showing the aftermath of all that happened in the last chapter.

So with all that, I kind of feel bad spending three paragraphs talking about parts I thought could have been improved. Regardless of that, this was very enjoyable to read and I do hope you consider another story like this one.

Oh, and I almost forgot. You killed Silkie; how could you? I've read a lot of dark and angst-filled Robin/Starfire stories, but that's just about as dark as I've ever seen.
Guest chapter 35 . 3/13/2013
You suck... Lol no jk
Guest chapter 18 . 3/12/2013
Go back to the movies and starfire has got that right to be mean here but I don't think that the emo song is a bottle of wine and robin should've said no more lies in its own to be mean here but I don't know where to be a nd SHE THOUGHT IT WAS CHOCOLATE CHIP COOKIES AND SHE THOUGHT she was funny slade im emo and starfire has got that right of them
sierrrra-renee chapter 44 . 2/3/2013
Wooooooow..I can't even summarize all of my feelings toward this story right now. I just can't. It's too much. This story is one of those heart wrenchingly good stories. All of the good times and the angst sent me on an emotional spiral! Kudos to you :)
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