|Reviews for Thank You|
| Swindler chapter 6 . 7/29/2007
oh...GOOD! I love it. Good job, it very well written and please...UPDATE SOON!
| kaitins chapter 6 . 7/29/2007
Interesting turn to see things from Blade's point of view. Keep the chapter's coming please, I can't wait to see all of this come to a point, and I am definantly interested to see what happens when Viv tries to return home.
| stress chapter 6 . 7/29/2007
I'm glad the hiatus didn't last that long, Peg. I really do enjoy this story :)
I'm a huge fan of flashbacks and the way you used the technique to reflect on the beginning of the story was just great. Poor Ellie, I feel so bad for her. She tries to do the right thing and gets into such a mess.
Blade is way creepy. And Boastful Beth. It's a good thing I just woke up or that might have given nightmares. Yuck.
Oh, I hope Ellie and Francesca watch out. Blade is a coming for them. This should be fun ;)
| stress chapter 5 . 7/15/2007
I really liked this chapter, Peg. Having Ellie's life get all mixed up with the newsies in such a way is entertaining and totally believable. And, once again, I love your Skittery :)
The last line of this chapter was very good. It's foreboding while, at the same time, creating a separation between Ellie as Ellie and Ellie as Pegasus. (If that makes any sense to you... either way, I liked it.)
So, yes... how long will this hiatus last? I want more. Yes. *nods*
| Swindler chapter 5 . 7/7/2007
This story is amazing. I love it. Brilliant. Its very diffrent than most fanfiction. Update really really soon!
| q chapter 5 . 7/5/2007
update soon this is a good story!
| kaitins chapter 5 . 7/5/2007
I was very excited to open up fanfiction and see you had updated. The new chapter was great. It will be interesting to see how the whole blade plot line unfolds.
| kaitins chapter 4 . 7/1/2007
I just found this story today and I am very pleased with it so far. I like the story, it is original, different from alot of the other stories, and the quality of writing is also great. More soon please!
| stress chapter 4 . 6/17/2007
Oh, Peg, that was such a good chapter. It was so nice to be looking at ff . net and seeing that you had updated this.
I loved the way you portrayed the way the newsies responded to a lady's presence. So often writers (including me) forget that the boys have such manners when a girl is around. That really drew me into the story.
And Stress was mentioned! I was totally squeeing over that part :)
So, in short, this chapter was awesome and I can't wait to see what's going to happen to Ellie. And, not to mention, the bit about Chess was perfect, too.
Very, very awesome!
| shot to pieces chapter 3 . 12/2/2006
i really like this. who was ms. francesca with? whats gonna happen next? idk, but i am glad you started writing this again! :D
| stress chapter 3 . 11/12/2006
Awesome chapter as always, my dear. The way that Pegasus got her nickname was great - and the little plug about fiction writers made me laugh out loud.
The characterizations are spot on - especially Dave's 'seize-the-day...' mood. I loved that.
And the exchange between Skittery and Ellie was entertaining. I can't wait to see what that relationship evolves into ;)
| SusieMinnesota chapter 3 . 11/11/2006
this is a great story so far! i loved what i read and i cant wait to read more!
| Dreamless-Mermaid chapter 3 . 11/8/2006
OMG I love this! It's so good! I'll send in a few characters, mind you they're mostly girls _; I do have one little boy so I hope you can use them :D Anyway, I really really like this and I'll send in those profile things tomorrow :)
| Emba chapter 3 . 11/7/2006
Haha, Skittery is quite the lady charmer. And Ellie swoops in to save the day...she's pretty good at that. Good chapter! Update again soon
| stress chapter 2 . 11/5/2006
Aww, Peg, that was an awesome chapter. I love the characterizations of Ellie and how Francesca was not as shallow as we first perceived her to be. The situation was interesting and I love the last line. And yay for horsies! ;)