Reviews for Asking Questions
K5Rakitan chapter 1 . 10/2/2011
This is a really fun concept, and I think you could make it really awesome if you did a re-write. I have glanced over some of your more recent work and noticed that you have improved a lot :)
Burning Inferno chapter 5 . 12/20/2006
This is a great story, but try to space out the paragraphs more. And I feel sorta awkward reading this, but that's my fault, so keep going with this! It's good!
lightningstrxu chapter 5 . 11/5/2006
it's okay but you should start a new paragraph each time someone speaks, this was hard to read because it was so cramped
Lustful Angel In The Night chapter 5 . 10/22/2006
i loved your story so much it was good and it has a very happy and a little bit of a funny ending
r0gue lebeau chapter 5 . 10/15/2006
LOL! That was awesome!
dragonlady222 chapter 5 . 10/15/2006
Good chapter and great ending.
dragonlady222 chapter 4 . 10/15/2006
Good chapter. I'm glad they were embarrassed. Now it makes more sense to Mokuba and Serenity. They know that the others love eachother.
dragonlady222 chapter 3 . 10/15/2006
Good chapter that creep got what he deserved.
dragonlady222 chapter 2 . 10/15/2006
Poor Serenity. I'm glad Seto was there for her. Good chapter.
dragonlady222 chapter 1 . 10/15/2006
This should be really good I feel for Joey and Seto.
16forever chapter 2 . 10/14/2006
Halarious! i was laughing almost the entire time!
r0gue lebeau chapter 1 . 10/14/2006
LOL! This is going to be so good!