Reviews for The Dance Lesson
Guest chapter 5 . 5/13/2014
...Oh damn.
FMAsonlyAlice chapter 8 . 11/5/2012
Why did Edward have to draw a circle? He should be able to use his normal clap-slap alchemy technique...
ma chapter 10 . 4/21/2012
yeah, so that was great. best part in this chapter for me in this chapter was ed wanting to cover his ears and chant "I cant hear you". just wonderful

as of the rest of the fic, it was very entertaining. enough to keep me up later than I should be considering tomorrows timetable.

deep bow for making this multi-chaptered and although leaving it hanging for ages, leaving it hanging in a good place where we all can continue our lives.

thanks
ma chapter 5 . 4/21/2012
I too think hughes was IC, but honestly, I dont think ed could do something that cruel. although he may not know much about the war, he knows its nothing to fool around with, and ed aint the type to hurt others that deeply. pranks,yes but that...I would think he is more the type to think the pain he feels is a payment for his sins and that he deserves it. of course, thats just me talking, and by any chance Im not saying I would be right. your story is good, and I like the way the characters are played out. and I dont know many drinking games either... ;)
AliceImagined chapter 8 . 9/16/2011
The only thing I noticed that was wrong with this story is that Ed shouldn't need to draw a transmutation circle on the floor. Other than that this story's amazing :D
Lizzybear54 chapter 10 . 12/9/2010
If your still continuing this story then plz update! i love it! and hughes should have never died! I was so sad that i cried! :'( i also love how u got those shirts! i want them! plz send me some pics on facebook, if you have an account that is! well, now i'm rambling, so i just wanted to let u know that i really enjoyed this and i'll be sure to check out your other masterpieces so expect a lot of reviews from me in the near future. i really enjoyed it.b hope to hear from u!RoyxEd/EdxRoy forever! xxxxDDDDD 3333

~Lizzy xD 3

P.S: I did get the rain thing i remember it from the episode when hughes died in the original series. Damn u Envy!
BokuwaToriniNaru chapter 3 . 4/28/2010
I am alreaady soo obssesed with this fan-fic! SO MANY CUTE HEART-STOPPING MOMENTS!
xxedxwinryxx chapter 2 . 10/1/2009
that was a really good chapter. i liked it. it was really cute! why wont ed just admit that he likes roy? :)
KilluaEdHitsugayaLover chapter 10 . 7/28/2009
yay for people who dont like killed hughes :D ! anyways, does ed still have this urge to shout when hes called small, i mean hes nineteen/twenty (right?) so he should be a tall handsome grownup youngman ;3 who doesnt care if people call him small. or maybe its just me making weird remarks... anyways seriously fun story! can't way till the next chapter ;)
Gypsy Madamme chapter 10 . 7/17/2009
u kno what the best thing abt this story is? the fact that ed hurt roy. i mean how often does that happen? not very much, i can tell you. this was a very light, entertaining story and i'm not gonna read anymore because as far as i can see this is the perfect place to end it.
WannabeFireFox chapter 10 . 5/29/2008
I can't see Ed posting that kind of poster D:

But this was still an awesome story! Haha I read this story a long time ago, but it was slow in the update... I think... it was long ago... I love the order that you put the flower meanings in, it's so sweet. :]
VermilionValentine chapter 10 . 4/15/2008
AW THAT SO SWEET

you have GOT to update this soon! its been an year already! UPDATE!

p.s

yay cookies!
Erian-chan chapter 10 . 2/19/2008
KAWAII! I never would have thought Edward to be so romantic :D

I love it! Please update soon, i wanna know Roy's payback to this XD MUAHAHAHA
Aubreyvamp chapter 1 . 1/16/2008
I know Ed liked it, heh!
Coletterby chapter 10 . 1/8/2008
loved the flowers. very cute.

can't wait for chapter 11!
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