Reviews for Lane's Law |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Great job, i love Oliver and i wish there were more stories with him in it, wonderful story i really enjoyed it |
![]() ![]() ![]() Kind of drabbly for you, but frankly you have the Midas touch when it comes to SV fanfiction, and you'll hear no complaints from me. Please, keep up the good work. I love every word of it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved this story! It was very well written. I'm having a heck of a time finding Lois/Oliver fics. I'm so glad that I stumbled upon this one! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I've already recc'd this fic on TwoP, then realized I never left feedback! *Blush* So I thought I'd leave a comment here just to surprise you. :) I've said before that you're one of the few fanfic authors who can actually make me like Lois, and this fic is a great example of why I feel that way. She's funny and snarky without being pushy, and I loved her banter with Ollie, especially in the kitchen. It was hilarious when she blurted out that Lana had left her pots! It's obvious that Ma Kent coddles this girl a bit too much. Clearly, Ollie's going to fix that, though. *G* They make an adorable pair, and I loved the last line: "I am now, My Lady." Aw. :D Great job, as always, D! |
![]() ![]() OMG! I just love this story. Ugh! I hate that this story is done...right? Well...Whatevs. I love Oliver and Lois together! Please write another story about them. You write them perfectly! |
![]() ![]() ![]() omg great chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() Really cute! I like it! |
![]() ![]() i like it! hope to see more! |