Reviews for Peter Pan Syndrome
victoronice chapter 1 . 10/1/2016
Aww I wish there was more honestly... this breaks my heart
Fuckthat chapter 1 . 12/20/2012
Please please please more, you're such a good writer
Mana-sensei chapter 1 . 10/2/2012
more please :)
naka-kun chapter 1 . 8/13/2009
can you keep continue this story? i hope so though. i love the idea. the plot is quite something. hhe. two-shoot is sound well though.
IDK1314 chapter 1 . 11/1/2008
ive got one word for u girliiee,


looking for the next chapter soon!
Merofero chapter 1 . 8/18/2008
what is there to say~?wow, that's one scenerio that i've yet to come across. every element worked well, their actions conveyed their true thoughts and it ws great how you had everyone almost act on impulse, no second thoughts. i could see it happening right in front of me. how old is everyone though? is there age changes, more dramatic then the original characters ages?at first, i thought it was going to be a relationship between Itachi and Naruto, but when it turned out to be only a one-sided love, wow (hehe, it's wonderful how smut works in mysterious ways)please continue the story, i hafta know what happens
YaoiQueen-Kendra-Itachi-Uchiha chapter 1 . 11/18/2007


Pleaz Post The Other Part Soon!

The Story's Just Awsome!
Angel of Lavender chapter 1 . 11/5/2007
ooh...thats so sad...:(
venus chapter 1 . 11/2/2007
D where is the second part? i want to know, want to know! P the suspense is killing me...

and you know, i think there's a yaoi manga exactly like this somewhere...cant remember the name off the top of my head, but i know it exists! it ends with a happy ending though~ you should check it out D
Skittlesaremydrugofchoice chapter 1 . 7/16/2007
Poor Naruto, and poor Sasuke. I can't wait to read the second half. Please give my boys a happy ending.
kaesaku chapter 1 . 6/4/2007


but well-done.

really liked it.

i think it's brilliant.

..loves your fic.

Jade chapter 1 . 5/23/2007
This realy remind me of this yaoi (or doujin..can' I think it was yaoi haha) that I have read :B

like 2 parts of it combined. BUT ITS GOD






Satele chapter 1 . 5/5/2007
I like the premise of this story. It's different from what a lot of other authors are turning out. Vrey good writing, I like your style. I can't wait to find out what happens to Sasuke and Naruto. Having them get together would be cute and awesome, but it would be cliche. But having them never get together would just be cruel and it wouldn't be very satisfying for the readers and might not be satisfying for you as the author...

So all I can ask for is a realistic ending that you want to write. That would be cool and awesome. I really can't wait to find out, hope you update soon!
Firework chapter 1 . 4/28/2007
Please continue!
Midnight Shining Star chapter 1 . 1/30/2007
Update, pretty please!
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