Reviews for Family
Kate the Stampede chapter 1 . 6/21/2001
Kawaii! I think Vash needs more hugs...I VOLUNTEER!
duO bAbiE chapter 1 . 6/19/2001
wai! wat a great ending i love it! I knew Milly is always more than people made her to be... . you did a great job of bringing her kindness out!
EvieApple chapter 1 . 6/19/2001
Great characterization! I didn't think it was at all OOC. Milly is such an underdeveloped character, and you've done a fantastic job of bringing out her personality. It's always good to take a break from the angst/yaoi/pairings and look at a sweetly and sensitively done character study. I especially liked how Milly's "big sister" persona surfaced. I also thought it was terribly poignant that when Milly wasn't looking at Vash, his voice sounded sad, but when she looked up, she could only see his smiles. Excellent, excellent work. Please, keep writing! _ -Rae-chan
JustShotMarvin chapter 1 . 6/17/2001
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAWWWWWW! This was soooooo sweet! I love stories like this! WRITE MORE LIKE IT!
Merichan chapter 1 . 6/17/2001
Yay! A non-romantic Milly piece! That was great, I really like how you wrote her and Vash. (I've always throught they had a great friendship). Keep up the good work
Skarloey chapter 1 . 6/17/2001
Ohmigawd. Millie and Vash dialogue is really good in this one.
NotHayama chapter 1 . 6/16/2001
Really nice fic! You kept in character really well throughout most of it- I can definately see Millie giving hugs all around as a solution to all of life's problems. The one part I have an issue with is your second to last paragraph- it makes Millie come off as a little too concieted. I can't imagine that she has that good a sense of how much her emotional support means to people. Millie looks up to everyone around her. Other people make the plans, and she follows them. I don't think she realizes how much people appreciate and need her, she runs on instinct and the simple fact that she doesn't want to see her friends sad. This is only my take on the character of course. I'm also being really nitpicky- up until that point, Millie was great in character and Vash was only a little off- and he's a damn hard guy to write. The whole scenerio is great too- we really don't see enough of Vash and Millie together without Meryl's loud, attention-grabbing presence. I hope you write more Trigun fics in the future- I look forward to reading them:)
funtime vash chapter 1 . 6/16/2001
great little fic, no too ooc, despite your protestations... I love milly so much, such a great little character...
Alyson M chapter 1 . 6/16/2001
Wow! I"m the first reviewer! I think. Anyway, this is an incredibly sweet fic, and you're right, there are hardly any fics with Milly and Vash interacting one on one. I look foward to future fics. _
deleria chapter 1 . 6/16/2001
Excellent story. You did a great job here.
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