Reviews for Jacksonville
shobbs chapter 15 . 3/13/2007
Oh. I love the last line!
LindaRoo chapter 15 . 3/13/2007
I loved that chapter! You really, truly are my favorite author on Your prose is always so readable. There are never any errors to get hung up on. You punctuate correctly. Everything is sprinkled with light humor and sounds so incredibly in character. I'm sad to see this story end, but am certainly looking forward to hearing more from you. Usually, fanfiction needs to be plodded through...but yours is always a joy to read. THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU!
teenlee chapter 15 . 3/12/2007
aww :) you should make a sequel! i loved this
jandjsalmon chapter 15 . 3/12/2007
So good. And it's the end, you say? What a shame. But yeah - it was great. Thank you for sharing it with us. ;)
teenlee chapter 14 . 3/12/2007
aww :)
teenlee chapter 13 . 3/12/2007
lol that was so funny not the garlic ! hahahha XP
teenlee chapter 12 . 3/12/2007
hahah bella's so funny :) i was getting a bit annoyed with her interruptions my self i wanted to kno what happened lol :) j/k
teenlee chapter 11 . 3/12/2007
aw i wanna lie in bed with edward reading to me! dont u lol :) bella's so lucky XD
teenlee chapter 10 . 3/12/2007
lol edward's so cute vamp. love book :)
T chapter 15 . 3/12/2007
Lovely! Thank you for writing this! Especially the last bit, about the acceptance letters; Edward in Florida, in college. - now that would be spectacular!
teenlee chapter 9 . 3/12/2007
aww ouchy poor bella :'(
teenlee chapter 8 . 3/12/2007
aww :'( poor bella somethings gonna happen to her when he's gone right? eek hope not... well ur story's complete so i dont have to worry about u not updating lol :) alligators? lol XD eww
teenlee chapter 7 . 3/12/2007
yikes! scary. your scaring me too now ! omg lol i guess thats what fan fic. does it controls us well mostly u b/c im obsessed with this story :) well off to the next chapt since i really wanna know what happeend
teenlee chapter 6 . 3/12/2007
yikes! but that was funny :) not the ending tho ... .gah on to the next chapt! i loved the beg. when phil was driving slow tho :)
teenlee chapter 5 . 3/12/2007
hahaha :) i love this! ok officially on my fav. author list :) lol
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