Reviews for Jacksonville
Bravo chapter 5 . 10/17/2006
This is one of the only non oneshot storys I like.

Its great!
Asquared91 chapter 5 . 10/17/2006
That was good!

I love thai food! Its so good!

Update soon! I loved the last line. :)

Alison
BlackEyesSurprise00 chapter 5 . 10/17/2006
Hi. Finally! Good example of Bella choosing her fights, cuz sometimes the arguing-cuteness can get a big old (but still loved), so her accepting something easier, but with still having a purpose, it was a new twist on a familiar device. Please put up a new chapter soon and continue writing good stuff!
Color Hope Yellow chapter 5 . 10/17/2006
aw... that was so cute. I was reading the book and wondering if they were ever going to do that. And it looks like you did. That is awsome! UPDATE SOON!
Across the Stars chapter 5 . 10/17/2006
awesome! nice updates. thankies 4 my shoutout!

Much Love and Acetone,

Icyfingers13
The Lion and the Sword chapter 4 . 10/16/2006
wow! this is a really good story! it is really believeble...like the characters would actually do this in the next book!

post asap please!
Across the Stars chapter 4 . 10/15/2006
Hey, awesome story!

If you need help with any details about Jacksonville, you can ask me. I live there, so I'll probably be able to help.

IcyFingers13

FYI: the weather's always a little unpredictable in Jax. It can be raining on one side of the city and sunny on the other lol
Asquared91 chapter 4 . 10/15/2006
Good job! Make the next chapters longer!

Update soon!

Alison
Mediatorgrrl chapter 4 . 10/15/2006
OMG! Great story! I can't wait for more updates! I've laughed really hard from just the irony!

Love,

MG
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