Reviews for A Rat's Betrayal
devilzpride chapter 1 . 3/18/2004
powerful was very well written...awesome
azriona chapter 1 . 12/28/2003
I kind of liked this. It was interesting to see how Peter was growing more like Voldemort through this poem.
It’s getting easier, Sirius
My guilt’s getting smaller
I liked how with those two lines, you showed how Peter was losing his humanity. He feels nothing for the deaths he’s caused (Cedric as well as James and Lily), and he certainly doesn’t seem to feel anything for his parents.
The one emotion left to him, it seems, is pride …
I was passing him information, but it was much longer than a year, Sirius…
Which, funnily enough, is the same emotion that Voldemort has left. Not only is Peter trying to keep the upper hand over Sirius, but he’s really showing here that he has completely sunk to a new level.
A good poem – thank you!
Claire Thorpe chapter 1 . 7/22/2001
Hi, this is really sad. I ALMOST felt sorry for him. I will never forgive him for what he did to my beloved Harry's dad.

Oh well. I really love your stuff, bye.
Kimmy Larisa chapter 1 . 6/17/2001
Pretty good. I liked it. But a little short. ~ Kimmy
LordsBecca chapter 1 . 6/16/2001
Very powerful...great job! I really like it!