Reviews for Hot Egyptian Nights
SpiritWolf126 chapter 4 . 12/23/2008
okay, where do I begin? You started the story in the middle, with no real plot for one. The 'paragraphs' are shit, and you need to learn how to put them together better. You're forcing it along much too fast, and seriously, If you're going to put in an OC, have the decency to illustrate it's backround and give it some characteristics of it's own. For some strange reason, I get a feeling this OC is a self insertions, since people never elaborate on self insertions and instead throw them right into the plot and make them the ones in the lime light, much like you have done.
David boreanaz's wife247 chapter 2 . 10/9/2007
hey who's the yami and who's the hikari
Precious Destiny chapter 4 . 12/15/2006
. Kill da Bitch Malik! update soon plz :D
CherryBombChaos26 chapter 4 . 12/11/2006
gah... beat her up!
CherryBombChaos26 chapter 3 . 12/11/2006
damn that bitch. and Marik.
katTheCharmer86 chapter 4 . 12/10/2006
cant wiat for the next chapter
katTheCharmer86 chapter 3 . 12/10/2006
cant wait to read what happens next!
journey maker chapter 4 . 12/10/2006
Go Malik! Kick Akina's ass! I hope that they both get their asses kicked... update when you can please...
journey maker chapter 3 . 12/10/2006
I don't know if Malik should fight for Marik or not... Good Story.. Please update when you can...
katTheCharmer86 chapter 2 . 12/7/2006
cant wait for the next chapter!
CherryBombChaos26 chapter 2 . 12/2/2006
dude, cheaters suck. literally and figuratively. not cool.
journey maker chapter 1 . 10/15/2006
Is it getting hot in here? I think we need to call the fire department to put out the flames...This is one hot story, enjoyed reading it...
Wolf of the Shadow Realm chapter 1 . 10/15/2006
That was pretty good! Thanks Mika!