|Reviews for Frustrated|
| Electra Raven chapter 1 . 10/13/2008
wow! this was a REALLY hot fic!:D you defitnetly know how to write sexy fics and lemons. i love all of your akuroku fics, and this is one of them!w oh and i enjoyed axel and roxas in your author's notes!especially axel going YAY!XD he just loves akuroku fics dousn't he?xD
anyway, i agree with axel, i also want another akuroku fic, so i'm happy i reviewed!:D AKUROKU FOREVA!
| AngelsRevenge chapter 1 . 7/19/2008
lol yet again, I LOVE IT! please see my other reviews for equal praise of your greatness! *hugs* you rock!
| lady taylor chapter 1 . 2/3/2008
I agree with Axel write more akuroku!
you are my favorite author for akuroku!
| EscapeWater chapter 1 . 12/23/2007
Yes, please, another! Let them have their ways with eachother!
| NoelleisParadise chapter 1 . 9/23/2007
O.o...woah. that was SO sexy. i cant even explain. O.M.G.
| levisrictusias chapter 1 . 11/18/2006
Erm...perhaps the reason you get so many hits and no reviews is because it's poorly written. Now now! Don't kill me! Let me help you out here!
1- It SOUNDS like a teenage girl is narrating the story. It also sounds like a teenage girl has taken the place of Axel and Roxas. In other words, the language is poor and annoying.
2- The characters are not IN-CHARACTER. I highly doubt Axel would talk like that ("What does the little hottie have to be so happy about?"-I cringed) nor Roxas ("I had never seen him act so tender" is not the type of language he would use!).
3- Don't move so dang fast! ) It was like BOOM sex within two seconds!
That's just a little friendly advice from one author to another though. ) You can take it if you choose.
| kris126 chapter 1 . 10/20/2006
MORE, MORE, MORE!
| angel raziella chapter 1 . 10/19/2006
strange, sweet at the begining, but i skipped passed the "Hard-Core" bits, are you sure that it shouldn't be NC17 rating?
| ff-kh-luvrgrl chapter 1 . 10/16/2006
okies, i JUST looked at my own story...
my seccond try at enclosing actions that my muses and i do FAILED (as well as the separators...)
| phz chapter 1 . 10/16/2006
I guess that you will be having more hits then review.. am I right? that's what happended to my last one-shot.. i appreciate your work, so here am I, reviewing you
you should definitely do more of this! it's great, the way you wrote them and decribe them -thumbs up-