Awwwww I'm so happy now reading this fic after going through the Resurrection series.

Apologies for posting a comment in my own fic, but in case anyone's browsing comments to select reading material: the chapter 3 & 4 bug mentioned by a previous reviewer was fixed long ago.

(What the reviewers don't tell you: this story is a popcorn and soda action flick, not great cinema. ;) )

Hey, I figured I'd mention that chapter 3 and 4 are the same chapter...

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Otherwise, I really am enjoying this story.

I hate you so much right now (again, Jokes) you write such evil so well. I saw your story and went, 'hang on, has mista-wrong finally given up AuronLu?' but no, you write a fantastic story but you write it about THEM! -sniffle- I (don't) hate you, I really really (don't) hate you. -sniffle-

-Kuris-

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Damn it, the guys dead and you still turned it into an AuronLu thing. Hmph. I hate you. (Jokes). -sigh- All I can say is that Wakka had better not die after all this.

-is scared- -sniffle sniffle-

-blinks-

-forces self to keep a straight face-

-lip quavers-

-bursts into tears-

I like what Lulu called Vidina, sweetling- it's cute. I hope there's a happy ending but with this this damned internet connection...

Wakka isn't REALLY dead is he? Please say no! I'm almost too afraid to read on. At first I was terrified that he'd stay dead and you'd turn it AuronLu-style but then I remembered he's dead and thank God too.

That was so good! I love auron lulu pairnings!

Very good so far! keep going

A rare sight - an FFX fanfic written by someone with awesome skill!

All of it's very nicely written; Adding to my Favourite Stories for sure. :]

Am I so lame as to say that I had butterflies reading that? lol Aw I loved it so much, and the ending was so sweet _ You have such a talent for writing.

kablay (and everyone!) - thanks so much for your feedback! It may be that you are confused by a few spots where I left certain events to the reader's imagination, rather than describe things that might be too disturbing for younger readers. However, I've gone back over the story and smoothed the prose, so hopefully that will help!

This is pretty good, but very confusion. It's written very well, but the descriptive words make it harder to read. I have trouble knowing what's going on because there isn't enought description, and when there is, I don't understand it.

*claps*

Aw! That was so nicely wrapped up! The descriptions in the beginning were so vivid in my mind and beautifully written. Lovely!

Oh! I never got the email for this! If I didn't just happen to go on FFNET I wouldn't have seen it.

Great chapter! Look at Rikku being all clever, ha! And the moment at the end...I loved it!