Reviews for For Just A Second
CarsonandMrs.Hughes4ever chapter 1 . 5/18/2009
A great srory. Very good.
Sinister Slayer chapter 1 . 10/17/2006
Aw...I usually don't like 100 word drabbles cuz they're just too short but this was perfect. Nice work!
Phreek chapter 1 . 10/17/2006
This is pretty good. I will say this though: work on your focus more; find a solid direction and highlight that because it seemed a little scattered. Also, make sure to stick to one tense. You flip-flopped between past and present in this piece. I admire what you've done here though, it's difficult to narrow something like this down to a 100 word drabble. That is an art all on its own.