Reviews for Neo Yondaime Hokage
Firestar001 chapter 24 . 7/11
I LOVE Digimon Tamers so seeing Renamon, Taomon and Sakuyamon in the story just makes me smile. Glad you put them in and like em enough to do so.
Guest chapter 82 . 7/9
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Guest chapter 50 . 7/3
when one day Naruto and co be home now working with his tema mebers and the 1 one teas the guop had get to rand the boing books Naruto keep in the both fox on go co and then the gray men co his spy networking co , when in the top floor of the gray men co Naruto put in a calss room for them to working in and he had a big dask in it s will some for them to ueds too , when looking in the books the guop ask him why you like ueds to for we need kown why ,why you kown of gunder father old mebers of his tema boy yes will you gander pop do not wand other one like him when I was bond into the earth or some others too , itis kwon of it now we go to a bounyhuther shop I working with and when in it the 3 seeing bounyhuther and others who working it too , naurto like them seeing the bad guys he took out and it no a game or some teas to seeing why Naruto meds to working it too.
robert krause chapter 29 . 7/3
when be now the caln Leader now Naruto had be working no bony huther co he be working on buit it up it is name is Fox no go a co Naruto had ueds to took out bad guys and woamn like in the time Naruto had ueds it to help out too with some unkown time he had other co the Gary men co in the old trad ports in the outside of the vaillge he had ueds as a men cave home and offices and as will some time he had ueds it help men and woamn to get away from the svlers city and minds tooand battles in it rich men and woamn and them frilmys had ueds it to made moeny form it and then came Naruto the fox sinn who bund it down then took moeny form it too and when then goodens in it too get took out too ,when then Naruto own spy networking had help out to get them out to the bad lands and west couny for hood , when then the sound vaillge get took out as will some bases too and then naruto rack is up to sss calsss and itis seeing to keep out of his way too ,
robert krause chapter 17 . 7/3
when be on the road about 3 weeks Naruto had meet a others in his spy net working and when some men ex minds to some slvers he help out going over some men and woamn too and when in time Naruto had be help out vs the sound vaillge and then some others too , when in time the Misy vaillge had it top mebers of the old ways of it former kel and when the mebers was a woamn a old huge who run a army school and he took her out and kill her off and find a blcke book with her pother in it and it is her Sammy lee Robert sons the former herd of the school in the misy and was the top up one over it and when in her home is books and moeny Naruto took and some no the days in the roots abut blcke ops as one of danzo top Lt in it , when not to past is it he took with him and moeny too ,and golds too ,when then he be working on the gary men co a new kind of co in times as a spy newwoking too ,when he get the old post out side of the vaillge and put it no his bank moeny too ,when then the new co was opan and runing now . when keep the note books he get form the old woamn too ,it help too , when put in a slfe box in the co itis need too .
robert krause chapter 6 . 7/2
when in time Naruto had be a bounyhuther for when buit his own spy net working in time he took out a evil city out in the lands of winds out full of slver s men boys grils and woamn in it some time he had free them and bund down the city and he took moeny form it and art books and some others things into it cothers some he keep for his 3 wifes and then hife of others things he get he slod into a cothers shop he put in on the shop he opan up and sold them in it 10 % off and it took off too ,when then the meony form it help out too Naruto had help out with his wifes she shld s to some others things too , when in time the men and others he free is now in the bad lands and west part as his spy s and then one gril name sorry lee Robertson part gril and part fox bule and green hire and she is Naruto about dather and living in the home now ,
robert krause chapter 10 . 5/27
when he like his mom and god father he is a sage and when in time he get little big and was too get the rights to get away form the vaillge too when he be bounyhuther and running a spy network and when doing it he was in the black guy and white and was took out the most men and woamn in the b and was too into the Boig book with 500 to 800 to his name and will took out the guops of bouny huthers to goons armys for some time even his moeny get big too , when in then his be keep some sife homes in the whipool bad lands and the west couny s for when he be help ing out the men of Osds a evil slvers city he took out and the minds too and be keeping a spy network too , when then he be working with others too ,
That guy chapter 20 . 5/26
I don’t know if you addressed this earlier, or later in this fic, but shunshin is a technique where a shinobi send their chakra to their legs and dashes to a particular spot, the farther the distance and the difference in elevation increases chakra cost. You do not need a marker to shunshin somewhere, it just needs to be easily accessible (ie open window, outside, or a big enough hole to fit into). The Hirashin is a teleportation technique where you need a marker to teleport to (read teleport, not high speed movement, so you don’t need a way in other than the marker). The hirashin also doesn’t take much chakra, nor is it locked by blood or anything like that. The reason so few people know how to do it and can do it is because it is a fuinjutsu technique and very few ninja go into fuinjutsu and would rather study taijutsu and ninjutsu. In fact, the yondaime didn’t even invent the hirashin, it was the shodaime, the yondaime just made it easier to use and made it so he can teleport faster (one last thing, theoretically the sunshin can take more chakra than the hirashin, and it usually does)
Guest chapter 16 . 5/15
when in the time Naruto took out the gave robbers don rick Leroy ford and his twin bother sun jack lee ford when the 2 was in the whipool couny and with a big ass battle going on and both men get hit to the back and swords the 2 had was of some of the 7 sword men of the masy and Naruto find moeny the 2 had on them , both men was bad poking players and both had seeing old golf hats , when then Naruto find a way into the lock room moeny scolls and then others things he took with him , when put the men out in bouny bags and then get the moeny form them both was b rack ninjas calss form the Rain fell vaillge and was 1200.98 each and Naruto had feeling like the bounyhuther shop Rammy qukis was took more money to lase kown bounyhuther not to him , when in the slfe homes in the west couny and time to go huther now , a ninjas killer don a men and wife tema Lee fox and his lover raver was good as sss calss and it time for a pad day now , when the men had be took out 1 and then the gril she get too , and seeing it now Naruto put the 2 in a bounybag now , and was in red rand city and the owner was happy for it and kown Naruto who get his men or woamn was good too , as some was a cut off head of Gar Roy wolf the outlaw bounyhuther and killer of inlerds and a big thife and naruto 1 one , when in the city of sky lands Naruto had wars with Jack Woife and his wife Sammy lee and find out both of them was on the killers guop on the whipool couny and he find a Lost sword of B wofe the swords of his frilmy had and a old Dagger of the 2 Hokage ,Naruto keep both of them , and he had the bouny form the lovers . now .
robert krause chapter 8 . 5/13
when Naruto had bin the age of 29 be working on a new book call the bouny huther geed on the goth ninja warroir and he be working on it ,lits the men and woamn he was with and some who was hack job bounyhuther to bouny huther blacke lits men and woamn of the boing books who was paying to be men in it it the top lits he was 1 for it but unlike others who get kill off Naruto is sill living to 20 to 59 now , kids 19 and 5 wifes even it the time he be working as bouny huther to co buit ing men , bounyhuther co to some collaner co , his wife ion and others too he be with , when then Naruto be in the whipool tBute a new home a summer home and some sife home and men cave home too , when in the old cave he find moeny to scolls he took with him , some time he had the mob moeny as will to buit sife homes in the west couny to the bad lands for bounyhuther to a spy network he be working with , one time Ione town a evil city of slvers and evil rich men who Naruto took out was full of meony and scolls and books to having slvers grils and woamn who was in it too ,and men too , when took out the evil city Naruto find Ione in the mines he took it all some he sell and others he keep one day trying to buit up the 7 sword men up in the lavings and it is need too , he and some of the old boys he kown was the 1 in for it , and some women be in too tenten and his 3 wife temal , when the guop had be working in the back itis commer is Naruto ,
robert krause chapter 8 . 5/6
when Naruto had get up the working some new co in the vaillge of his home a books shop and when in the top floor he had time to doing his own book on the goddess of Destiny he made it into a book on a war queen and when it help the shop out with meony to keep it opan and sell others books of the sme one green and red one then gold and bule and when be may it was good too and doing a bounyhuther book and he made it kown why was to be on fan boys grils and golly hartuer and other kown buy guys he stop as a bouny huther kown as goth fox nights , a mask he doing into a skull of a fox and long dack clowle and his long lits of foes and had be long too , when the book he was working on with other bounyhuther a Wofe men Robert Krause of the rain Fell and then the ice vaillge ,
robert Krause chapter 16 . 5/1
when in the time Naruto took out the gave robbers don rick Leroy ford and his twin bother sun jack lee ford when the 2 was in the whipool couny and with a big ass battle going on and both men get hit to the back and swords the 2 had was of some of the 7 sword men of the masy and Naruto find moeny the 2 had on them , both men was bad poking players and both had seeing old golf hats , when then Naruto find a way into the lock room moeny scolls and then others things he took with him , when put the men out in bouny bags and then get the moeny form them both was b rack ninjas calss form the Rain fell vaillge and was 1200.98 each and Naruto had feeling like the bounyhuther shop Rammy qukis was took more money to lase kown bounyhuther not to him , when in the slfe homes in the west couny and time to go huther now , a ninjas killer don a men and wife tema Lee fox and his lover raver was good as sss calss and it time for a pad day now , when the men had be took out 1 and then the gril she get too , and seeing it now Naruto put the 2 in a bounybag now , and was in red rand city and the owner was happy for it and kown Naruto who get his men or woamn was good too , as some was a cut off head of Gar Roy wolf the outlaw bounyhuther and killer of inlerds and a big thife and naruto 1 one ,
BlazerBug chapter 14 . 4/28
i dins it dumb you said there was no point in lying about kyuubi, because its something very essential to the story and considering how s class criminals are after the information everyone in the room would be smaet realize they arent strong enough to keep that secret
BlazerBug chapter 11 . 4/28
you surprise me?...
BlazerBug chapter 9 . 4/27
it bothers me you skip training sessions, to me it makes it look like your just making the character get powerful on your whim
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