Reviews for Neo Yondaime Hokage |
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![]() ![]() ![]() why isnt the medic of medics just curing herself woman can literally create a healing factor |
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![]() ![]() Where are the other ninja? Guess konoha has absolute GARBAGE for security. No they don’t you fucking moron writer, use your damn brain. Ninjas are fast. The anbu would have been there already. And why the hell didn’t kakashi remove itachis head while he was in narutos head. Why did he just sit there watching? How fucking stupid do you have to be? |
![]() ![]() So they never warned him about the dangers of the sharingan? I find that incredibly hard to believe or narutos teachers are the biggest fucking idiots in the world. Naruto not knowing about elemental chakra at this point is also completely unbelievable. Naruto has some HUGE glaring holes in his knowledge and skills and it doesn’t make any sense whatsoever. Make this shit more believable idiot writer. |
![]() ![]() I hate Jiraiya and wish he’d have his cock and balls removed permanently. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is so excellent! I truly hope you come back to it someday as I noticed it hasn't been updated since 2015. I also hope you are doing well in your personal life as well. |
![]() ![]() A great story with plenty of punch. Story needs a lot of updates. Story has plenty of action, supense and humor. |
![]() ![]() ![]() amigo continuaras la historia |
![]() ![]() ![]() I truly don't understand how this type of phycological torture works, naruto clearly knows the people itachi is killing are only illusions, why tf is he still crying? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I can't wait for more..i stand by my point that this fic is better than the anime itself .. i forgot to mention in my last comment that i also love that you don't just focus on naruto and that everything doesn't just work out in the end in favor of the mc. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i reckon that this fanfic is even better than the anime itself. this naruto(fanfic) shows what's an actual mission of a ninja that the anime naruto failed to portray. i also loved that U. naruto arc and the characters development. |
![]() ![]() why not Naruto be a ace poker player for a long time his 2 set of money is to high up form both his be best out some long time foes of money and his had it to made a spy networking and his had to put the slaves city out into fire now, freeing the slaves both the mines and the city it own now rich men and women his had the money now and his it to buy out the clan money now, and it lands and town is now a place his workings with dead men women and kids it is a body f now and king Cobras now for it a v now, his selling off now, to all of others ninjas villages now, rock sand and others too, as for the former clan head his body be looking over finding blood form the wife and mother now and seeing his kill her and then his own clan get took out , too, when the blond hire and 3 black hires men had them skill took off and be made into book ends and note book part and then the bons get put to a mic hos and school now, and others get to be ash ends and put to the sea now, his had the names of the others who lost them life and loves ones and mom and dad name is on it now , light to it and was fire to it now , it now going out now, when back it his office it now his made a stone bust of the 3 wife now and showing her now, a scroll showing how she was kill off not by the fox , by some one a men , who was into the #3b room his had working on it too, seeing blood on the black ends now and wood hands too, and put it now others sawing it now, a new black rock be put up with the names of abut black ops man and women and staff of the hois and both his mom and dad and the old women too, |
![]() ![]() Naruto manhandles Kisame then a MUCH stronger Naruto (1 Year in between the two incidents) struggles with a random Iwa jonin, he also doesn’t help Kakashi when he’s fighting Zabuza, why, he wants to see Kakashi in action that’s just stupid, your in the middle of a mission facing a former ANBU, him not helping is just stupid, also Naruto just leaves the Iwa kunoichi in the forest instead of killing her after she attacked & tried to kill him TWICE, also the way Zabuza was killed was bad writing. |
![]() ![]() I am not liking the spoiled brat attitude you are giving Naruto. Just sayin' |
![]() ![]() i just want to know he is a sannin level ninja but cant even defeat a jonin level opponent even when a sannin is kage level? i dont understand but this is still a really good story keep up the good work |