Reviews for Neo Yondaime Hokage
Zombiekiller666 chapter 1 . 5/19
WARNING! Carry on reading! Or you will die, even if you
only looked at the word warning! Once there was a little
girl called Clarissa, she was ten-years-old and she lives in
a mental hospital, because she killed her mom and dad
She got so bad she went to kill all the staff in the hospital
so the More-government decided that the best idea was
to get rid of her so they set up a special room to kill her,
as humane as possible but it went wrong the machine
thev were using went wrong. And she sat there in agony
for hours until she died. Now every week on the day of
her death she returns to the person that read this letter,
on a Monday night at 12:00 a.m. She creeps into your
room and kills you slowly, by cutting you and watching
you bleed to death. Now send this to ten other pictures
on the site, and she will haunt someone else who doesn't.
This isn't fake, apparently, if you copy and paste this to
ten comments in the next ten minutes you will have the
best day of your life tomorrow.
Max chapter 14 . 5/18
ch14 has too many words to describe very little
Max chapter 11 . 5/18
ch 11 I watched naruto completely and never heard anyone say that Hiraishin no Jutsu cost a lot of Chakra, Minato only used a lot of Chakra when he uses in large objects like bijudama
Max chapter 6 . 5/17
ch6 Jiraiya almost got himself... killed
EVIL-SAGE chapter 85 . 5/11
I really jave to say i loved reading this so far the creativity and plot of this story was amazing i really dont know why People were complaining about the story sure it deviates from canon thats because this is a FANFIC and sure some arcs felt like fillers but they added to the story like the summoning arc where naruto actually felt the life of a jinchuriki and matures due to it. I for one thoroughly enjoyed the dynamic, conversation and bashing of that part. Please see this story to the end as it is one of my favourites
EVIL-SAGE chapter 76 . 5/10
i love this
EVIL-SAGE chapter 15 . 5/9
lmao
The Sage With A Blank Mind chapter 10 . 4/29
Why would the Akatsuki want him? They dont know he had thé kyuubi, there was nothing saying to the public he did, so how do they know? Only a select few know Minato is sealed in him, and even fewer know he has the kyuubi as a servant
Dayside chapter 4 . 3/10
Tsunade you stupid bitch
Currahee506 chapter 85 . 12/27/2021
update
TheFieryDread101 chapter 2 . 12/11/2021
Hey, your story seems to be progressing well so far, but if you could, I would recommend improving your English grammar, specifically, in articles, meaning "the" and "a" or "an." Unless it's something with Japanese to English translations, Yondaime should have "the" before it, making it "The Yondaime," instead of "Yondaime." It's kind of off-putting for me personally, though the rest of your story seems to be fine.
Jin Kaisen chapter 40 . 11/13/2021
Why did you nerf him?
Guest chapter 1 . 11/4/2021
Holy shit, this fic is older than me
DaoistDarkNorth chapter 2 . 10/23/2021
I found the many doesn't like the flashback, but honestly, I don't mind it. Maybe I woke up from the right side of the bed and everything was great in my eyes. Still, I can see many problems and mistakes on the plot and writing, but while there is that, I can let it go.
Eddyg125 chapter 20 . 10/19/2021
Ok why did he not go all out instead to kill her? She should have been nothing compared to Kisame.
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