Reviews for Neo Yondaime Hokage
marquis.shax chapter 12 . 6/13
ok seriously DA FUQ? The Shunshin uses NO SEALS it's also not a god damn teleportation jutsu it's just a faster way of moving that uses your chakra it has nothing to do with seals or else not everyone could do it as they have absolutely ZERO talent with fuinjutsu even the most BASIC of it.
marquis.shax chapter 8 . 6/13
oh come on there was never a Namikaze clan that was of importance the sealing was all the Uzumaki clan. You really should go through and edit this entire story especially when it's so fucking stupid that you know the names of the Hokages but keep referring to them by title
marquis.shax chapter 6 . 6/13
ugh it's quite annoying how you keep referring to Hiruzen and Minato by their titles rather than by their names.
marquis.shax chapter 5 . 6/13
Why wouldn't you just have Shizune heal Tsunade or even have Tsunade release her strength of a hundred seal and just purge the poison the same way she healed from Pedo Snake stabbing her through the stomach or chest (don't remember which it was) with his sword which on any other Shinobi would've most likely been a lethal wound. Again you also fail with the whole Danzo thing as this would've been the perfect chapter to introduce him by having the kidnapper be suspected of being a ROOT agent but them being unable to prove it. Seriously Danzo would do anything to get that kind of power for himself
marquis.shax chapter 3 . 6/13
wow that's a fucking pathetic excuse the Kyubi would be seen coming MONTHS away and they'd make preparations to keep it away from the village. Hell even a week away gives them more than enough time to set up all sorts of seals considering even if Jiraiya wasn't in the village at the time Minato could've had the toads reverse summon him and they'd have been able to put up a million different seals to make sure the Kyubi never made it near the village. I'm starting to think this story wasn't as good as I thought when rereading it i'm seeing stupid shit like this. NOBODY knew Kushina and Minato were married aside from a very select few and NOBODY NOT EVEN 99% of the clans knew who Naruto really is aside from the KYUBI JINCHURIKI AND PRANKSTER FROM HELL
Shadowflame013 chapter 71 . 5/30
In regards to this chapter, I'd say you can make a spin off. We may never know what happened to the U. Naruto, since N. Naruto bequeathed him his knowledge.
jeronix chapter 23 . 5/26
Guest chapter 25 . 5/25
Its sasori isnt it
Ilikebedtimestories chapter 85 . 5/24
Guest chapter 85 . 5/11
the next time orochimaru you are a dead men and then on way out fool .
The Saiyan Sage chapter 1 . 5/9
Man I Just Read This Entire Story And I'm Pretty Sure It's The Best Story I've Read From Any Category... I Really Hope More Chapters Are To Come
my 2 guys chapter 4 . 5/9
that was good keep the chapters coming
my 2 guys chapter 3 . 5/9
that was good keep the chapters coming
my 2 guys chapter 2 . 5/8
that was good keep the chapters coming
my 2 guys chapter 1 . 5/8
that was good keep the chapters coming
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