Reviews for Neo Yondaime Hokage |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I have read it many times it be good if right before Madara Uchia defeat he turned tsunade, shizune, Naruto, hinata, ino, kureani, anko, neko,and female shinobi into 20 year olds that were attracted to each other that bonds together to the can’t be be separated less Than a foot from each other |
![]() ![]() ![]() WARNING! Carry on reading! Or you will die, even if you only looked at the word warning! Once there was a little girl called Clarissa, she was ten-years-old and she lives in a mental hospital, because she killed her mom and dad She got so bad she went to kill all the staff in the hospital so the More-government decided that the best idea was to get rid of her so they set up a special room to kill her, as humane as possible but it went wrong the machine thev were using went wrong. And she sat there in agony for hours until she died. Now every week on the day of her death she returns to the person that read this letter, on a Monday night at 12:00 a.m. She creeps into your room and kills you slowly, by cutting you and watching you bleed to death. Now send this to ten other pictures on the site, and she will haunt someone else who doesn't. This isn't fake, apparently, if you copy and paste this to ten comments in the next ten minutes you will have the best day of your life tomorrow. |
![]() ![]() ch14 has too many words to describe very little |
![]() ![]() ch 11 I watched naruto completely and never heard anyone say that Hiraishin no Jutsu cost a lot of Chakra, Minato only used a lot of Chakra when he uses in large objects like bijudama |
![]() ![]() ch6 Jiraiya almost got himself... killed |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really jave to say i loved reading this so far the creativity and plot of this story was amazing i really dont know why People were complaining about the story sure it deviates from canon thats because this is a FANFIC and sure some arcs felt like fillers but they added to the story like the summoning arc where naruto actually felt the life of a jinchuriki and matures due to it. I for one thoroughly enjoyed the dynamic, conversation and bashing of that part. Please see this story to the end as it is one of my favourites |
![]() ![]() ![]() i love this |
![]() ![]() ![]() lmao |
![]() ![]() ![]() Why would the Akatsuki want him? They dont know he had thé kyuubi, there was nothing saying to the public he did, so how do they know? Only a select few know Minato is sealed in him, and even fewer know he has the kyuubi as a servant |
![]() ![]() ![]() Tsunade you stupid bitch |
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![]() ![]() Hey, your story seems to be progressing well so far, but if you could, I would recommend improving your English grammar, specifically, in articles, meaning "the" and "a" or "an." Unless it's something with Japanese to English translations, Yondaime should have "the" before it, making it "The Yondaime," instead of "Yondaime." It's kind of off-putting for me personally, though the rest of your story seems to be fine. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Why did you nerf him? |
![]() ![]() Holy shit, this fic is older than me |
![]() ![]() ![]() I found the many doesn't like the flashback, but honestly, I don't mind it. Maybe I woke up from the right side of the bed and everything was great in my eyes. Still, I can see many problems and mistakes on the plot and writing, but while there is that, I can let it go. |