Reviews for Neo Yondaime Hokage
andrewmctague chapter 85 . 11/27/2016
I know people have said it before but I've read this as well as Sealed Legacy in the last couple of days and I'm really hoping that you're going to continue this. My main problem with fanfiction is when writers don't finish a good story, especially when the the story is this long and has built the characters up so much.
Anyway, please keep it going cause I know that quite a few people would help you out.
S-Lioness chapter 40 . 11/19/2016
Seriously, something about your story is catchy. I don't like it, I feel Naruto is over powered, many characters are too ooc (at least for me), I also generally don't like harem fics (maybe reverse harem,yes) and originally I was searching for oc fanfics. Yet here I am reading your story, even when i tell my self its not to my taste I keep reading it. I wonder why, maybe it's your style... I guess i should congratulate you and say good job. Please don't hold it against me but I will stop reading your story, not completely I think i will finish it thou I feel like I need a break.
The Ultimate Naruto lover chapter 10 . 10/26/2016
hahahahaha the another mask joke
Trekio112 chapter 52 . 10/14/2016
kabuto is so egotistical 'I'm just about on toe with kakashi' bitch please you barely measure up to haku before shippuden upgrades you with orochimaru snakeyness, and this is pre-shippuden
Trekio112 chapter 37 . 10/13/2016
bitch he just got out of a coma directly caused by using 4 life ending kinjutsu, and you decide that since he didn't expect to live he deserves to be slapped by your extremely overpowered manhanded self . tf is in yo head lady
Trekio112 chapter 28 . 10/13/2016
but Ino isn't a weak fangirl in thishow could she tie with sakura
Trekio112 chapter 20 . 10/12/2016
what's the difference between shunshin and hirashin in this? from what hirashin is described as (teleport to kunai with marker instantly in a yellow flash) then shunshin is the SAME except no yellow flash? (in other stories and in canon shunshin is just a high speed travel movelike chakra sprinting on steroids)
Trekio112 chapter 18 . 10/12/2016
"he'll go further and surpass all expectations, I expect nothing less from my son" well aren't you an overbearing contradictory mother, pray tell, oh paradox goddess, how you expect him surpass all expectations when that's what you EXPECT
Trekio112 chapter 16 . 10/12/2016
WHYYY THE MASK WAS AWESOME ATLEAST WAIT TILL HE GETS INTO A RELATIONSHIPI need more "ANOTHER MASK?!" scenes
Trekio112 chapter 11 . 10/12/2016
this boy is sannin level in mind and body... but has no jutsu but his orike and academy henge and kawamiri...I call plot holes...convenient and entertaining plot holes that is
Trekio112 chapter 3 . 10/11/2016
...agh you fucker I thought he was gonna be a Nara .3. author-baka you've crushed my dreams...I'm still gonna read cause its still interesting
Trekio112 chapter 2 . 10/11/2016
naruto as a Nara...I love you author-samayou've made my secret fanfiction dreams come true
adammflatt chapter 85 . 10/4/2016
I so wish you would at least finish this arc, this was such a good fic, while it started to decline as you lost your inspiration the storyline and writing of the worst chapter of this is better than the best chapters of many other docs I've read and I would love to know what else you had planned for the story and future arcs
Zadax chapter 27 . 9/6/2016
I don't know how the rest of the fic is going to go but I'm almost giving up in reading this because you say he's sannin level but then you let the weakest fucks bash him around all the time... You aren't too smart mate.
Kylnee chapter 26 . 8/14/2016
HOW THE FUCK DOES HE NEVER SEEM TO NOTICE PEOPLE LISTENING ONTO HIM AND YET HES KAGE LEVEL .-.

(still LOVE the story so far, just found this funny XD)
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