|Reviews for Persephone|
| M chapter 8 . 2/17
/CLAPS/ My girl Persephone, pre-emptively arming herself! Clever, badass girl. I love your characterization of her asdfghjkl
| M chapter 7 . 2/17
Your writing is so evocative. Love that ending scene -
Persephone moved to tears over her joy of finding out that living things can grow in the underground. Creative concept.
| evening's shore chapter 6 . 2/17
YESSSS! A thousand times YES. I've been searching for the most satisfying reaction of Persephone to being kidnapped - the anger, the fight - and you wrote it exceptionally well. That beautiful fury and use of her powers, the not-cowering - 1000 kudos to you. I love her deadly anger and eloquent words. WRECK HIM PERSEPHONE.
| Pure Happenstance chapter 21 . 5/13/2017
This is a gorgeous telling. Wonderful work.
| guest chapter 21 . 3/27/2017
I know that you probably won't see this but your writing is fantastic. It's so eloquent and beautiful the way you talk and describe everything. Absolutely beautiful.
| yaz chapter 8 . 1/25/2015
It seems like it could be good but some chapters are boring
| Mairi Le Fay chapter 4 . 8/10/2014
Beautifully written. Great job!
| sinemoras09 chapter 19 . 6/29/2013
Far and away one of the best retellings of this myth I've read, and this includes actual published works. Fantastic job with this! Thank you for sharing :)
| devon380black chapter 21 . 5/25/2013
Beautifully written...although you should have indicated angst as one of the genres because I couldn't help but cry in the later chapters. Kudos!
| dlglewwe chapter 1 . 5/2/2013
A wonderful introduction to your story. I liked the way you introduced the characters and started the story at the end. It's a nice thing to be able to do when re-telling such a classic tale like this one.
| meriland25 chapter 21 . 3/26/2013
I have read literally thousands of fanfics and stories and tales in this site, bit I can honestly say I have never read such a utterlly, incredibly beautiful piece in english as this one. The writting is like poetry or a song, so enthralling and mesmerazing, it traps the reader in the words in a way I had forgitten. This , this is true written beauty! I honestly , from the bottom of my hearth, thank you for writting this fanfic, for giving me and so many other people the chance to relish in the wonder of ypur talent! Thank you! I can only thank ypu, I have no more words to describe the awe-inspiring, trully and really magic experience that was reading 'Persephone' ...just thank you!
| Guest chapter 5 . 2/6/2013
| Guest chapter 13 . 11/8/2012
I love your story and the path you have taken, but chapters 12 and 13 are a bit confusing.
| bubblegum-smiles chapter 1 . 9/14/2012
Awww! This is so *sniff, sniff* SAD! :( You write such great emotional scenes!
| Aeris-LKX chapter 21 . 5/3/2012
love love love it