|Reviews for Two Words|
| jen chapter 1 . 12/5/2011
Yuki would not accept an "I'm sorry" from Ayame. What happened to him because of the rejection was too damaging. So, this story is unrealistic and definitely unbelievable. Sorry :P
| Pheonix09 chapter 1 . 11/19/2009
nice you should make a sequel
| kimochichokimochi chapter 1 . 2/5/2008
short and sweet.
i like itt]
| Silver Dreams On Golden Wings chapter 1 . 7/2/2007
Dun need a signed review right?U know who I am! , how com eur profile doesn't have a I like Lean?:(. a TT .
| funngurl chapter 1 . 5/8/2007
Good fic. A bit short, but pretty good 4 ur first try. _ XD
| xiassen chapter 1 . 1/19/2007
that's acually really makes me smile.
| littlefiction chapter 1 . 11/2/2006
that was cute, if only Aaya had your insight.
| Winter's Light chapter 1 . 10/17/2006
Aw! That's so cute! YAY! Another Ayame X Yuki brotherly ficlet! XD I have one...but... It's crappy. XD
Well, continue writing~!
| skrblr chapter 1 . 10/17/2006
I liked that! It was a fun sort of thing to read, especially since, you're right, there aren't a whole lot of fraternal Ayame-Yuki stories. You had the characters down to perfection! Wonderfully matched to the originals. If you ever decide to write more, let me know! Am I right in saying the focus was entirely on the interaction and dialogue? I mean, rather than the scene itself, setting-wise and so forth. Because the only thing I'd consider improving would be added description about how things look, smell, feel (texture and such) - you got the sounds already - , you know, that kind of detail. But still, it was a very sweet little thing!