great ending :) I loved this story so much, I loved how you made the plot original and I adored the characters. probably one of the best modern fanfics I've read!

well it sounds great!

This is better than most P&P books on Amazon! Publish this, now.

Omg, you have saved me from the most boring day of work.

Great story, thank you :-)

This was an incredibly well written story and I loved it. Thank you for sharing. :)

Love you story... Especially the ending ;-)

This story was absolutely amazing thank you :)

Hmm, I keep being nit-picky with details, but one that really bothered me here was Mrs. Bennet as a volleyball player at an NCAA school and being described as tiny. Female volleyball players I see are taller than the average guy!

On a lighter note, I'm still enjoying your plotting!

Still liking this story! The melodramatic lines that I noticed from the start are still distracting, though. Lizzie is not signing her life away; her character would never agree to such a thing.

Thanks for writing! I like the humor in your story so far. However, some lines seem to be in there just for effect and confuse the story somewhat. For example, "very pregnant" usually means she's ready to give birth, and no one uses twenty-five boxes of pregnancy tests.

Great work! I've read it before but enjoyed it this time too!

Lovely!

Nice ending! I'm so glad Abby wasn't his!

AW shit. It's his, isn't it? He's got a real talent for not having to TRY...