( i am prideandprejudiceff, i had just log out)
you finished the story perfectly. it was very good. bravo.

Darcy is such an asshole.

Oh holy fuck... you bastard Catherine De Bourgh!

this chapter was soooo cute! oh... the jack and jill's song! Lol! (im loling in the inside)

that was so beautiful. "she signed her life away". bravo.

FUCK! MARRY HIM!?

you know, all i always wanted from fanfictions, was that they remove lydia and wickhams elopement and seperation between jane and charles. so, i thank god that this story really removed them.

Hug

Lizzy's a bit of a shit too isn't she...

... What happens to Sarah though?

Awww man! this was fucking amazing! lots of thanks for your work!and i suck a reviewer so sorry! really totally love the fic!;)

great story but tbh i would've been fucking pissed at eva for not coming clean much earlier- could've saved lizzie and darcy a lot of headache (and heartache).

I love this story so much! If I reviewed already I'm sorry, if I didn't I'm even more sorry. Wonderful read, Lizzie's still my girl and Darcy's still a botard, however the plot couldn't be more different and fun even if you tried! Not that it seemed like you tried, the writing seemed to flow in that way that seasoned writers have a knack for. I know you probably have, but read some orchidvines stuff if you haven't, y'all could have n separated at birth. I'm leaving this review because I plan to read this a second time. Bet you're jealous.

I'm cracking up at the nerdy section of this chapter. Here's hoping my roommate doesn't wake up to my cackles.

In love with this story, points where I smiled ridiculously and points I wanted to punch the screen, but that's what makes this good writing because it brought out emotion and attached me to the characters!