Reviews for The Consequences of being Late
Sora Loves Rain chapter 17 . 4/30
Crazy good
Fox chapter 1 . 2/17
I enjoyed the story. I feel it was written purely as a porn and as most porn films it was unrealistic and lacked of proper storyline and dialogues. I didn't mind.
It would have been nice if Lucius noticed that she was a virgin and was a little less rough with her at first. An experienced man would notice tightness even if there was no blood. Thanks.
snape.granger.fanfic chapter 17 . 6/21/2015
Brillaint please finish it love this story
deliciousflowerfire chapter 17 . 4/14/2015
great. so romantic
Lailana chapter 1 . 1/5/2015
Completely unrealistic. I assume those who approve of this story are fans of fifty shades of grey as well.
IAmAFallenMischiefAngel chapter 17 . 12/12/2014
This is a very good story. Please continue! This is my only escape from the world. My best friends boyfriend just broke up with her and now he won't leave me alone even though i think his face looks like a donkeys butt. This is my personal way of venting. Help!
HermioneSnape4eva chapter 15 . 4/17/2014
Why is it that the only sex scene that you decide to describe was the rape scene?! That is absolutely crazy, none of the other scenes where detailed only this one. Wasted time.
Way to make Blaise black as well smh
So Im A Bitch chapter 7 . 2/9/2014
Ur story sucked im sry but thats the truth so Kk bye_
horny 69 chapter 17 . 2/9/2014
Wow i loved the story plz hurry and make the rest of the storie plz!
KagomeRevekagurl chapter 17 . 12/4/2013
Ewwwwwwwwwwwww! Ithought this was supposed to be a dramione story. You ruined my childhood innocence.
OceanBlueSeaEyes chapter 17 . 8/28/2013
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magmazite chapter 17 . 11/17/2012
awesome story, i can't wait to see more :)
LillianMarie2 chapter 17 . 6/30/2012
its rather interesting this story. i hope that you update soon. i look forward to the plans you have for them i hope they're devious and naughty
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