Reviews for The Consequences of being Late
Guest chapter 1 . 11/28/2017
Starting it with the list of clothes she's wearing isn't the best way.
Guest chapter 17 . 11/25/2017
Like love, keep going
Al chapter 3 . 7/2/2017
It's a great read. I love how you've kept the characters the same with the spirit they were written with , with your own added flair. I can't wait for the next chapter. But I can wait. Sometimes creating can take a while.
Me chapter 17 . 4/3/2017
He caught her!
E chapter 1 . 3/8/2017
Guest chapter 17 . 2/11/2017
This is by far the best HP fanfic ive ever read i actually cried at the end and it was so thrilling erotic beautiful and well written it was just incredible
HunterNet12 chapter 17 . 1/16/2017
It's strange... but i guess in a good way.
jmullinax chapter 17 . 12/19/2016
Please finish this story
Jewels Lunarisa chapter 17 . 12/5/2016
Sweet :)
Slytherin Princess34 chapter 17 . 9/28/2016
please continue
Sora Loves Rain chapter 17 . 4/30/2016
Crazy good
Fox chapter 1 . 2/17/2016
I enjoyed the story. I feel it was written purely as a porn and as most porn films it was unrealistic and lacked of proper storyline and dialogues. I didn't mind.
It would have been nice if Lucius noticed that she was a virgin and was a little less rough with her at first. An experienced man would notice tightness even if there was no blood. Thanks.
snape.granger.fanfic chapter 17 . 6/21/2015
Brillaint please finish it love this story
deliciousflowerfire chapter 17 . 4/14/2015
great. so romantic
Lailana chapter 1 . 1/5/2015
Completely unrealistic. I assume those who approve of this story are fans of fifty shades of grey as well.
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