|Reviews for Holding On To Let Go|
| Nana56 chapter 8 . 3/16/2007
I've been reading your current story, "Into the Fire", as you've been posting it and decided I had to go back and read this one to see their history together. I read it today and have to say that I'm completely worn out.
I do love Brenna and think she'd be good for Dean. Too bad Kripke can't find someone like that.
These two stories are absolutely amazing! You have a wonderful talent and I'm so glad you're sharing it with us. Thank you for your generosity!
Really, really, great job!
| JoyBean chapter 8 . 3/15/2007
Clap, clap, clap, applause, applause! A great story that I loved from begining to end. I'm glad there was more Brenna/Dean action, that their father showed up, that the story tied into the episodes, and that you wrote three more stories that I'll be able to read! Wonderful, wonderful, wonderful!
| JoyBean chapter 7 . 3/15/2007
I like that there is more story after the battle scene-it just has a better closure to everything. I love the character Brenna and am hoping there is some resolve between her and Dean. Those two had such passion in the beginning of the story.
| JoyBean chapter 6 . 3/15/2007
Quite the climactic battle! I've never had to write an action piece (so I don't know how hard it is), but you did a great job. Again, your writing feels so 'real'.
| JoyBean chapter 5 . 3/15/2007
I really like the brother's psycological motivations and how you explore them. Another great chapter-a nice lull in the action before everything gets crazy.
| JoyBean chapter 4 . 3/15/2007
Another great chapter! Now, I'm wondering how they are going to kill the Banshee and how Brenna/Dean will act around each other when Dean wakes up? I like the whole 'white' magic versus the dark too. Dean is probably the first person that (barely) got away from the Banshee. How will that affect the story?
| JoyBean chapter 3 . 3/15/2007
Another wonderful chapter. You ratcheted up the tension, scares, and darkness quite nicely without losing the momentum. Also, this was a great follow-up over the previous cliffhanger. I like how the end of the chapter shifts over to Sam's point of view. This story is very interesting on how two different psychics see/feel Dean and how Dean hides from them and himself. Time for me to read on.
| JoyBean chapter 2 . 3/15/2007
OhMyGod! What a great chapter! I was squeeling at the cliffhanger! You wrote the romance beautifully. It seemed to be a fully realized progression of Dean/Brenna being wary/scared that quickly was overuled by passion. The thing I like about your writing is that it always feels 'real', even though there are supernatural and fantastic elements swirling around the main characters. And I still have six more chapters to read! I am so lucky right now-haha!
| JoyBean chapter 1 . 3/14/2007
That was one hell of a great opening chapter! The characters were spot on, the tension felt real, and I love the mystery/suspense that you are developing.
| SupernaturalGeek chapter 1 . 3/14/2007
That was really good. You captured the boys perfectly and I loved how all the 'moments' were balanced by humour so it was still in character. I always like Sam in protective mode, taking care of Dean, so this was great. And I like Brenna - she seems a good match for Dean! ;)
Really well written story :)
| aithreachas chapter 8 . 3/4/2007
You are an exceptional writer and I am a shameful reader for not reviewing each chapter as I went along. I have read your three completed stories today, this being the first, and I wish I could do justice with my review but sadly I am just a reader not a writer so I will have to simply say thank you.
| AquarianNightSky chapter 8 . 2/26/2007
This story was good too. Can't wait for your next story with Brenna.
| sweetie0704 chapter 8 . 2/7/2007
This is my first review. I just finished reading and the fic was wonderful. It was recommened to me by a friend and I loved it. I read Ramble On before this and both are just fantastic. You have a way of making me feel what the boys are feeling. I can almost feel their pain! You are a wonderful writer and I hope that you keep writing. I am on to read your other fic. Thanks for the wonderful fics!
| heather03nmg chapter 8 . 2/2/2007
I've only been reading fanfics for a short time but I have to say that you are by far, my favorite writer.
By the way, I just love hurt Dean and worried Sammy stories.
Keep the stories coming!
| Intex chapter 8 . 1/19/2007
Great story! I loved the very last part! Lol. Feel the wrath of John Winchester! Lol!