Reviews for Die Down
Drakkenfyre chapter 1 . 5/15/2008
Excellent story! I especially enjoyed the bang-on Brass characterization. Actually, I liked that it was Dark!Brass. Very believable and a nice twist on what we normally see written about him. Oh, and his dialogue that you wrote was so witty. :D

And I loved the Sara-Sophia tension. I've been rewatching season 5, and it's right out there, so I was glad to see some more of that.

And Kinky!Grissom? Simply divine! Very subtly done, but very effective.
MajandraNova chapter 1 . 8/22/2007
Nice story. It keeps me longing for a sequel, though. I'd like to know about Grissom's past ... hm
ladybirdington chapter 1 . 7/3/2007
Hahahahahaha, poor Grissom. The old, panty hand-off. Maybe not immediately before he has to process a scene though, he's going to be very distracted.

Excellent writing, as usual!
MYBIGBLUEBOX chapter 1 . 12/23/2006
hi excellent story! the trick with the jump suit sounds pretty damn amazing wish I could do that. please keep writing
Beaglicious chapter 1 . 12/15/2006
Schlampcat chapter 1 . 11/4/2006
He. Nice story.
CrysWimmer chapter 1 . 11/2/2006
Very cute... neatly done.
Amazon chapter 1 . 10/20/2006
OMG i can relate so well! hope i get the chance to do something like that! Wounderful story
microgirl chapter 1 . 10/19/2006
That was just plain awesome! I really enjoyed your portrayl of the more saucy side of Sara. Thanks for sharing this fun piece :)
Chicklit chapter 1 . 10/19/2006
Absolutely delicious! The only thing that would make this story better would be a sequel in which Brass (who presumably got an eyeful) nails Grissom. :) Thanks!
jilly74 chapter 1 . 10/19/2006
Gosh, do you know how much I love your writing? I wrote something along a similar vein once (using the whole "get your underwear into Grissom's hand" thing), and for
anneruhland chapter 1 . 10/18/2006
OH kay! the sex will be hot tonight. Oh to be that lucky.
JackofSpade chapter 1 . 10/18/2006
Favorite Line: ...putting just a little extra sway in her hips.

Work it Sara Work it!

Least Favorite Line: END

This tempting little ficlet is screaming for another chapter!
Zamboni chapter 1 . 10/18/2006
Hey, what a cute story! Never heard about an "unseen" strip! Wonderful idea! And a "drooling" Grissom! Very well done! Thanks for that! heike
Taletha chapter 1 . 10/18/2006
Yeah, I would have totally paid money to see that!

I love snippets into Sara and Grissom's relationship. Nice work!
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