Reviews for Brothers United
angel61991 chapter 11 . 12/16/2017
One thing I need to point out from reading your story for a second time: Snape is NOT that much of a bastard. He wouldn't outright be a douche bag to Ranma because he would acknowledge that he was not raised by James Potter, that he goes by RANMA not James, and that he's LILLY'S son as well. Snape personally, while pretending to completely hate Harry, does help him as much as he can. Snape also wouldn't be underhanded enough to use something like a fear of cats as something to use against Ranma. Snape is HONORABLE! Using a fear like that is not something he would even consider!

Other then the Snape situation, I like what you have going so far. Though I do wonder who Remus is going to end up with now that Tonks is with Ranma.
cutiecat92 chapter 11 . 6/19/2017
I love this story! Are you going to do a bit about Snape's reaction to Girl-Ranma about how she looks just like Lily? Maybe make him suspicious and think she's somehow related to the Evan's?
That would be fun :P
Can't wait for the next chapter! XD
Faery66 chapter 11 . 4/17/2017
Is this still being written?

Guest chapter 11 . 3/28/2017
Please please please please continue this story is cool and I'm sure I'm not the only one who wants to know what happened next I know it's been a long time but this is too good of a story to give up on so please continue it
Alex2909 chapter 11 . 1/17/2017
awesome story idea
moon so bright chapter 4 . 10/7/2016
Nice bit of sparring.
moon so bright chapter 3 . 10/7/2016
Dumbledore was the one who gave him to Genma, wasn't he?
moon so bright chapter 2 . 10/7/2016
I see he ran into Potter. How exactly did he get into Surrey?
moon so bright chapter 1 . 10/7/2016
Interesting story concept.
Kitten Arina chapter 11 . 1/26/2016
The way you continue with your notes at the end was really annoying and as I stated before it sucks that you have abandoned this story for so long even if I dislike a lot of what you have done.
Kitten Arina chapter 5 . 1/26/2016
I don't care about the Cubs at all it was a lame joke to begin with but even more importantly the flame on stolen from fantastic four are you try to turn people away from the story half way through sense you don't seem to want to finish the story.
Kitten Arina chapter 1 . 1/26/2016
I am unsure of the name that you chose to use in this story however I hate it even more that this story sits unfinished.
Gekkou Yoko chapter 11 . 11/17/2015
This fic... Love it! I hope you continue it someday. It is a really good read.
Guest chapter 11 . 7/1/2015
Rnjoyed this fic hope to see more
Lotharin CW chapter 1 . 1/17/2015
Lol, James Alexander Potter, J.A.P. - Japanese, well played!
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