Reviews for By the Hand of Jack Sparrow
Anonymous chapter 1 . 1/31
What kind of retard goes out on deck during a horrible storm? And what kind of equally retarded captain would LET them? Plus we know literally nothing about our main character, not what she looks like, family relations, her friends names, heck, we don't even know HER name! What kind of first chapter is this that chucks the plot at us like, 'Here it is, hope you enjoy!'
Anonymous chapter 5 . 1/31
Oh, lovely! You know the character is a nice strong female lead when she kisses a hot guy after know him for a couple hours! I mean it's what every normal person would do! :D
Guest chapter 7 . 10/27/2016
Jack, Jack, Jack, Jack, Jack, Jack- my point is that in almost every single sentence/dialogue Jack is mentioned. Its kind of annoying if you ask me.
Guest chapter 7 . 10/27/2016
I've noticed something- at the end of Eve's sentence 'Jack' is mentioned in almost every single sentence/dialouge. What I'm trying to say is that it's annoying and that you don't need to do that in almost every sentence. And Eve/ your OC is totally a Mary Sue.
Smiling Seshat chapter 4 . 11/6/2015
The whole story is in third person point of view, and the four last paragraphs have you suddenly switching to first person point of view. You should change that last part so there's no jarring change of POV.

Otherwise, nice story, though I felt like 'luv' was being a bit over-used. It might just be me, though.
13's a charm chapter 32 . 1/20/2014
0.o the blood oath has been around for ages. Its in multiple books and everything.
VioletRiddleLover chapter 35 . 6/16/2013
I LOVED UR STORIES OMG I WAS SO INTO IT THAT I DID NOT STOP READING OMG UR AWESOME THIS STORY HAS TO BE THE BEST OF JACK SPARROW STORY YET! 3
La Victime chapter 1 . 5/19/2013
I just want to let you know, I've read and re-read this series of stories I honestly can't tell you how many times, and each time it's like the first time I read it. :) You are truly a phenomenal writer and I hope that, if you haven't started already, you'll be writing/publishing a book of your own (maybe even a trilogy) and be as successful as some of the greats :) Thank you, for giving this story to us, for showing (properly) a side of Jack not many can create. I say again, you are truly a phenomenal writer. I am blessed to have read your stories.
Raina Darlig chapter 35 . 6/5/2012
SO GOOD!

GOOD JOB!
Lady Lumina chapter 35 . 1/19/2012
Adored it.
Loopy Lini Cakes chapter 35 . 4/11/2011
I had a lot of fun reading this. The ending was perfect and I was honestly surprised by how well the whole thing turned out. Honestly I think that its my favorite where a modern girl is the ofc
LunaAnatolia chapter 31 . 10/24/2010
Love the story so far.. you just forgot the part where Jack has a brother, Captain Teage ,we met him in AWE? Ah well, doesnt matter, just thought I would mention it :D

Ill be reading your sequel as soon as im done here!

Much love.
vampirelover2009 chapter 35 . 8/18/2010
so cool! thumbs up! :)
Liliesshadow chapter 29 . 6/12/2010
Pamela Anderson would envy...xD

I love that line!
Songbird of Night chapter 35 . 6/1/2010
This has got to be the best self-insert POTOC story I've ever read! :) I enjoyed it so much! On to "A Sparrow's Shadow on the Sea"!
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