|Reviews for By the Hand of Jack Sparrow|
| Moka-girl chapter 4 . 11/6/2015
The whole story is in third person point of view, and the four last paragraphs have you suddenly switching to first person point of view. You should change that last part so there's no jarring change of POV.
Otherwise, nice story, though I felt like 'luv' was being a bit over-used. It might just be me, though.
| 13's a charm chapter 32 . 1/20/2014
0.o the blood oath has been around for ages. Its in multiple books and everything.
| VioletRiddleLover chapter 35 . 6/16/2013
I LOVED UR STORIES OMG I WAS SO INTO IT THAT I DID NOT STOP READING OMG UR AWESOME THIS STORY HAS TO BE THE BEST OF JACK SPARROW STORY YET! 3
| La Victime chapter 1 . 5/19/2013
I just want to let you know, I've read and re-read this series of stories I honestly can't tell you how many times, and each time it's like the first time I read it. :) You are truly a phenomenal writer and I hope that, if you haven't started already, you'll be writing/publishing a book of your own (maybe even a trilogy) and be as successful as some of the greats :) Thank you, for giving this story to us, for showing (properly) a side of Jack not many can create. I say again, you are truly a phenomenal writer. I am blessed to have read your stories.
| Raina Darlig chapter 35 . 6/5/2012
| Lady Lumina chapter 35 . 1/19/2012
| Loopy Lini Cakes chapter 35 . 4/11/2011
I had a lot of fun reading this. The ending was perfect and I was honestly surprised by how well the whole thing turned out. Honestly I think that its my favorite where a modern girl is the ofc
| LunaAnatolia chapter 31 . 10/24/2010
Love the story so far.. you just forgot the part where Jack has a brother, Captain Teage ,we met him in AWE? Ah well, doesnt matter, just thought I would mention it :D
Ill be reading your sequel as soon as im done here!
| vampirelover2009 chapter 35 . 8/18/2010
so cool! thumbs up! :)
| Liliesshadow chapter 29 . 6/12/2010
Pamela Anderson would envy...xD
I love that line!
| Songbird of Night chapter 35 . 6/1/2010
This has got to be the best self-insert POTOC story I've ever read! :) I enjoyed it so much! On to "A Sparrow's Shadow on the Sea"!
| Ravenclaw Slytherin chapter 35 . 8/12/2009
Love your story! Can't wait for sequal.
| Lady-Finwe chapter 35 . 4/20/2009
loved it nuthing i could think i would change bloody fantastic, ggreat writing cant wait to read more :) peace
| Onitsu Blackfeather chapter 31 . 10/18/2008
I really love your story. But just so ya know. Jack's full name is Jackson Teague Sparrow (wiki him deary). His father is Captain Teague the keeper of the Piritas Codex (pirates code) He shows up breifly in POTC3: AWE. And his mum got caught by head hunters.
Hehe, Keifer Sutherland did great in that role XD.
But for sake of AU It's really good. I've always loved self insertions. Just remember though, Jack hardly says 'my' it's usually 'me' Very cockney british accent(I can't hear Jack's voice well in my head with the grammar being good like that lol). But so far it's really good. And I TOTALLY mean that. I just had to get those little trifles off my chest.
Can't wait to read your others! :D Cheers!
| HufflepuffRave chapter 2 . 7/29/2008
This is really good so far. ) I love the conversation about puppied. P It made me smile. ANyways, can't wait to read the rest of it, so I'll go do that right now. P