|Reviews for Revelations|
| chapellefan chapter 1 . 7/16/2008
Nice, very sweet.
Thing I liked best was how you filled that particularly giant plot hole and mentioned Mai's confusion with Tate and Mikoto.
My only big complaint is that there really isn't a focus here.
You seem to be meshing 2 stories together.
However, you pull it of in such a genuine fashion, I can look past that.
| Dinurs chapter 1 . 7/29/2007
this defently is intreresting :) have you made the story where you'll be using it yet? if yes what's it called?
| Teresa Kaiju chapter 1 . 10/21/2006
A novel idea. Would be interesting to see where you can take it.
| Thorn on a Rose chapter 1 . 10/18/2006
A definately different take on the series and I hope you continue it!
I love the pairings so far by the way-~ Especially the teasing about Natsuki and Shizuru!
I look forward to more if you choose to do more!
If not, then Great Job!
| Jomasten chapter 1 . 10/18/2006
Well, the most possible explanation is because Mai's Child is the phoenix. And everyone knows what happens.
But this theory works as well.