Reviews for The Fruitless Vision
NobodyAtAll chapter 1 . 7/26/2012
I enjoyed reading this, especially the description of her venture into the woods alone. Very nicely done :)
JamieDidn'tDieInCulloden chapter 1 . 8/21/2009
A great story. Very good.
Neekie chapter 1 . 11/19/2008
Absolutely lovely.
boombangbing chapter 1 . 8/5/2007
Oh, this is exactly the kind of thing I wanted to see explored. Your metaphorical language really works here, and the fact you didn't try to mimic Shakespearean English is great. Fantastic writing.

Also, the last line of your Author's note made me smile.
Vowels chapter 1 . 5/29/2007
This is really lovely! Thank you.
Reviewer chapter 1 . 12/2/2006
Beautiful. Tragic. Completely true to the story.

I love it!
loveroflanguage chapter 1 . 10/22/2006
I will never understand why crap gets tonnes of reviews, and lovely writing gets so few. This is lovely writing. A very nice dip into the head of Helena, and an intriguing look at the potential fallout of the love juice. The grammar and spelling show that you care, and you have a nice turn of phrase.
Sirael Lythling chapter 1 . 10/22/2006
It's kind of funny that your summary involves 'and still he speaks to her in poetry' because this was a big theme when we were studying Midsummer in Honor's English - the fact that lovers rhymed unless they were angry with each other. what i'm getting at in a roundabout way is that it's good that you mentioned than detail. and Christian Bale is the sexiest Demetrius in existance.