Reviews for Clockwork
Guest chapter 4 . 5/9/2014
this is so original! you should continue you this. it's my opinion but i like this very much/ never read a story about a clockwork boy before
Yuyne chapter 4 . 7/20/2013
It's so nice, but I'm a little confused. I usually don't like to give reviews (I'm lazy XD ) but since the number of favs and the number of reviews are the same, and I'm going to like this, I want to give a review so it's even :D This doesn't always happen , it's really rare, I think. I hope others continue to keep it equal. And update soon, if you are free, I mean. I hope you don't discontinue this story! :P
Fireotaku18 chapter 4 . 10/29/2012
more please? this is really good, I can't wait to read more of it!
Kukiko-Rei chapter 1 . 6/13/2012
Love it love it 3 xD
rokudaime09 chapter 4 . 3/11/2012
another nice plot you've got there! i already knew that kakashi was telling his and sasuke's story. though there are still lots of mysteries... and i love that...
Bishie Huntress chapter 4 . 10/23/2011
Was that a hint of... Itachi? It seems like your story's starting to pick up a bit! I'm saaad to see no updates for so long. Will you be continuing this?

I greatly look forward to learning more about both Naruto and Sasuke. And will Kakashi be showing his face again? (Hmm... Does that count as a pun? X3) I want to see if Naruto places! I also want to see what the other contestants entered! And what annoying, makes-you-want-to-shake-some-sense-into-him! thing will Sasuke do next? XD Also, was it my imagination, or did Naruto's smile warm his frosty heart just a bit?

Oh, yeah! Back when Sasuke threw Naruto into those shelves... The whole apron thing was a little confusing. Naruto was untying it? Why did Sasuke get so pissed? I confess, I was a little lost there.

Hoping you continue!

Bishie Huntress chapter 3 . 10/23/2011
LOL A "you give and I take" relationship does seem to be rather pertinent to this story, doesn't it? XD

I loved the part of this chapter where Naruto treated a drunk Jiraiya like a horse. I had to chuckle!

I definitely thought it was interesting that, after Naruto sang to Sasuke, he seemed to feel the cold more acutely than when Sakura woke him. Now, how will Naruto warm his heart?
Bishie Huntress chapter 2 . 10/23/2011
Oh! I was so excited to get my internet back so I could go on to the next chapter, that I nearly forgot to leave a review!

I noticed a few missing letters (and a word once, I think), but nothing a fine toothed comb wouldn't pick out! I have to admit to some curiosity as to what this story was like before. ) I'm also a little surprised Naruto was so willing to accept the Nine-Tails as his own work when he was so clearly reticent to use the doll (aka Sasuke). Granted, most of the fox was his work, and the insides were like what he was trying to accomplish, but I figured he'd be feeling some hesitance and guilt since it wasn't actually his doing that made it work. :shrugs: I will have to see how it goes in chapter 3!

I liked to see Naruto and Sakura's friendship. ) I do so like it when people don't pile hate on the poor girl. She does try! )

Also, I found the distinct difference in the tones of the song when Sakura sang it versus when Naruto did to be interesting. This feels, to me, like a key piece of the puzzle. Or at least very interesting! XD And there must be some magic at work to make Sakura forget the tune and, in fact, the very existence of it!
Bishie Huntress chapter 1 . 10/23/2011
Ah! Philip Pullman! It's been so long since I've read anything of his.

I really enjoyed chapter one. D I'm wondering just what Naruto will come back to in the morning. Silly boy, forgetting about the instructions.

I'm completely enthralled with this chapter, and must continue on to the next. I really can't find any fault with it. )
Madame Penguin chapter 4 . 8/10/2010
honeysyrup, it has been three years so I think this wonderful story deserves an update right about now. I love the mystery you install into the character's personalities, even the ones who are upbeat and happy like Naruto. It makes me want to read more but gets sadly disappointed when there are no more chapters to read. You have created a story that I can only guess at what might happen next like "Is Itachi going to show up suddenly?" or "Is Orochimaru going to steal Naruto away?" and "WTH are you doing Kakashi and for not explaining the situation to Sasuke!"

For some reason I kind of wish that if Naruto were to whisper that song into Kyuubi's ear, then it might come to life as well like as if the song was sung by the right person, the curse then takes effect rather than it just affecting one person like Sasuke. I just like the idea of an over-built Kyuubi following and pestering Naruto funny.

TenshiXXX chapter 4 . 7/31/2010
Oh, I adore this fic! I can't believe it hasn't been updated since 07! I hope you eventually decide to update, because this is a beautiful, incredible fic! I hope we find out everything soon- why Itachi did what he did, why Naruto is so good at clockmaking, how the hell Sasuke has a mechanical heart...
Art-Of-Escape chapter 4 . 4/18/2010
hey you should totallyupdatethis! its awesome!
Doodled93 chapter 4 . 12/29/2009
AWESOME! you should update! i like all the detail you've put in, and this is such an awesome storyline... but is Orochimaru after Sasuke or Naruto? or does he just think those fox diagrams are sasuke's?

anyway, update please!
SoulSpirtHeart chapter 3 . 9/9/2009
I'm definitly a big fan of this story, I'm really glad I came across it! You're writing style is really good and your plot is entertaining, lately I've read a lot of pointless fics and it's very refreshing. I hope you're planning on continuing this .
KittyHug chapter 4 . 4/6/2009
Nice, unique story you have here. Look forward to you updating._
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