Reviews for Don't Make a Sound
Guest chapter 1 . 12/27/2019
Loved it!
LadyAmazone chapter 1 . 10/27/2014
Its nice :D I really like the idea -
Eros ex Nihilo chapter 1 . 10/28/2009
totally smutty and sexy. so, basically, i'm trying to say i loved it to death...teehee...graveyard sex...okay, i'm done. nice story, i really enjoyed it.
glitterglitzer chapter 1 . 10/11/2009
I loved it. :-)
DAngel7 chapter 1 . 5/19/2009
I like it! ;] chapter 1 . 11/19/2008
LonelyHearts2008 chapter 1 . 4/8/2008 deliciously naughty! I loved the premise of this and Neji's little "game". Pure smex.
Jaded Baby Blues chapter 1 . 3/3/2008
Phew! I'll say! That was good lemon! Liked it and it wasn't too kinky.
darkmistress in the shadows chapter 1 . 1/25/2008
Hmm…truth be told, I have never read a HinaNeji fic. I came across this one, whilst looking for NaruSaku ones.

For a hot lemon, that was good. It had an actually theme: for her to stay quiet, and his little “game”.

Cookies for you.

I actually liked the imagery of where they were, more than the actual lemon itself. Hinata’s determination to stay quiet seems original for a lemon like this. I liked. Oh, and Neji’s constant ‘looks’ he gave her, and the way he refused to let out any sound was very in character of him. Good job.

I might just like this incest-like shipping now. Might.
Kerridwen LeStrange chapter 1 . 10/29/2007
How do I describe this?



XD Haha, great job, I loved it. Neji/Hinata is so interesting, ya have to love it!

-Kerridwen LeStrange-(Used to be Gwen the Kakashi Obsessed)
papercut ai chapter 1 . 10/13/2007
usually, i'm not a fan of this pairing.

right now, however, i'm pretty much converted.

it's excellent. v. sexy
SithMistress chapter 1 . 9/16/2007
for the love of everything wright another! so great!
gaara-sasusaku7 chapter 1 . 7/5/2007
it's very romantic
Joni Da Pony chapter 1 . 6/16/2007
Lol. Cute and hot at the same time. I loved it. Good job.

Mell chapter 1 . 6/5/2007
O.O! wow! it's awesome! luv it lemons like this one rock! (i know, i know im a naughty reader XD) could i have da link to da hinata/neji art? plz?
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