Reviews for Tortured Soul
lilly chapter 1 . 7/25
Guest chapter 14 . 6/24
loved it until the deaths but laughed all the way through (LOL toilet hippie clothes!)
Mz. Martino chapter 10 . 11/30/2014
I love this story so much. I laugh reading it every time!
KeepCalmBePositive chapter 1 . 5/1/2014
This was...unorthodox. I haven't made it past the first chapter. I know you said it would be rushed and everything but that didn't mean that it should lack emotion. There was no connection to the characters for me and there were some major gaps which would have made the story a little more interesting and easy to read.
maxrox21 chapter 14 . 6/7/2013
I loved this story. it's about time a story about bella having a back bone was made
Guest chapter 1 . 11/28/2012
His looks could rival Edwards with his smooth pale skin, light brown eyes, and long Black hair.

Only read up to there and I already love it!
Long Black hair!
JadeObsession chapter 14 . 10/29/2012
this was hilarious, and am soo glad my favorite, Loretta lived to the end!
DAISY chapter 14 . 7/26/2012
that was sweet mixed with humor and drama. I love it write more PLEASE
Babysis64 chapter 14 . 7/13/2012
this was a good story and thank goodness that Bella didn't go back to the Cullen's and i can't believe that they tried to get her back until the end before they left lol. Didn't work though and it is non of there problem or non or there business on what Bella does or wants but she told them yes she does love Nikel and that she told the truth on Edward for leaving her twice so that is there doing not hers they lost her well Edward did cause of what he did she is happy with her husband now and her little family that is left
Babysis64 chapter 12 . 7/13/2012
poor Jamie and Loretta she had to put her mate down cause of the volturri not good
Babysis64 chapter 11 . 7/13/2012
are they the children of the moon or shape shifters maybe they would now Bella from when she lived in forks but who knows
Babysis64 chapter 10 . 7/13/2012
yes i am proud of Bella i can see her getting mad because that is not her concern on if she loves Nikel he is her husband her life he is her everything and i can see her getting mad with the questions i am glad when she said that it isn't any of your concern or what ever may be and yes she does love him.
Babysis64 chapter 9 . 7/13/2012
well i am glad that Bella is still with her husband Nikel and not going back to Edward and he said he won't leave her again and how does she now that he left her two times already and that isn't good no one can stand that and what she does in her life is not up to him at all it isn't his life any more it is Bella and her husbands life on what they want to do with it,Just because Bella is a vampire now he wants her back that isn't fair for her or her husband and yes i do wish Bella can say the three words back to Nickel I love you it's not hard you married him you should be able to say the words to your husband Bella
Babysis64 chapter 6 . 7/13/2012
now i understand this chapter very well for Bella's annoyance would be Edward Cullen thought he knew Bella and thought that she kept her last name and mean while she is legally married to Nickel Kattalaka and to me that is a long last name but hey they left her and what they wanted her to stay single and dye well Nickel fell for her right away so there we go it's not only you Edward that another could love Bella for Bella and not hurt her and he gave her what she wanted in life so you missed out buddy so just leave Bella alone is happy with her life married for just about fifty years so yea leave her for Nekel's grief would be his mustang when his brother brought it home wrecked.
Babysis64 chapter 5 . 7/13/2012
well Edward thinks he can win over Bella again but her sister warned her and Nickel what he was going to try and that wouldn't work out for him because her and Nickel were together for over fifty years,and Edward should respect that he's still a whiny child
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