|Reviews for Elladan|
| Guest chapter 13 . 8/22/2015
what a thrilling story! very well written!
| Jammerbammer chapter 13 . 4/5/2014
Hey I really liked your story very creative I hope you'll write more
| gginsc chapter 13 . 7/21/2011
Poor Elladan! I think the villain should have suffered more before he died! The happy ending was nice, though.
| Killingmemory chapter 13 . 9/23/2010
Thank you for writing this story. I really enjoyed it. I love how you brought a new land with different customs, creatures, and topography realistically into Tolkein's world, and how you meshed the three different narrations. You also described the different hardships the characters faced in a much more mature and realistic way than in many similar stories.
| Moonhera chapter 13 . 12/10/2009
O .. .I would like a sequal to this ... really i would ... its very good!
| TheFightingTemeraire chapter 13 . 2/14/2009
That story was pretty much the most dismal thing I have ever read. Great job.
| TheFightingTemeraire chapter 12 . 2/14/2009
Oh my word! Poor Elladan! He's crazy now!
| TheFightingTemeraire chapter 11 . 2/14/2009
| TheFightingTemeraire chapter 7 . 2/14/2009
I am guessing that Tariq is similar to Beorn.
| TheFightingTemeraire chapter 6 . 2/14/2009
I hate Ak'tun.
| TheFightingTemeraire chapter 4 . 2/14/2009
What does d'ialla mean? And what kind of thing has Elrohir? And I really, really feel terrible for Elladan. I seriously want to save him. And is this story supposed to bring Gladiator to mind?
| TheFightingTemeraire chapter 2 . 2/14/2009
"Oh Elrohir death comes on swift wings for thee!" -This line sounds so epic! Like something straight out of a Charlotte Bronte novel. And I though Elrohir had died until the last two sentences. Gave me quite a scare.
| TheFightingTemeraire chapter 1 . 2/14/2009
*shocked* I am almost speechless. Almost. A desert? This must be AU, I swear. *being Captain Obvious* Because there are no deserts on Arda! And Elladan a SLAVE? A loincloth? The heck? Poor boy! And the names are SO familiar sounding. Which is strange, because they aren't familiar at all. Gracious, this first chapter really got my attention. Reading on...
| Vamp.Michelle chapter 13 . 9/22/2008
Talk about a cleansing rain! I think they all needed that - each for a different reason.
That was quite a tale again. I always like how you manage to convey such a feeling of choking danger so effortlessly. And I like the fact that why you provide us with a "happy ending" (of the sort that all of the main characters are still alive and breathing) it is tainted. It leaves the characters permanently changed and marked.
| Vamp.Michelle chapter 10 . 9/22/2008
I see a big reunion coming! Though, it seems that our friendly bear-thing is determined to kill the good guys. That's NOT good:)