Every sentence is so emotive but confusing when there's a change of time with no indication... Even an asterisk would be very good of you to give.
Lani is a cute name

Omg. That's one way to leave her Cloud!

Oh this was so good.
His personality comes out so well in a simple list.
Lol about bubble baths and shopping.
So good.

Dann right Cloud wants his ghosts. But I do pity him... His life was too confusing and difficult poor Spike.
And Yuffie.. wow how could such an idiot make such good reasoning as to why she loves a guy?

He does have those eyes

My two favorite characters in ff7, together at last!

Beautifully written by the way. I was hooked from the first sentence and read the whole story in one sitting!

I love Cid and Tifa together - enjoyed this lots even with the back and forth in the time stream!

She's wearing a red dress, or she's covered in blood? Checking vitals? Panting? Pulse?

Very confusing, but so enjoyable~

Is there a hidden meaning?

I mean... why hadn't Cid touched her in four years? :o

Why, Cid, whyyyyyyyyyy?

:) Looking forward to reading this.

I actually looked these up as I read. Helped me to follow the story better!

Excellent story, a pleasure to read

xx

'I'm going to loose her before I even get the chance to have her.' - beautiful line, but its lose not loose!

Well written, as always. Pregnant sex, hm? Some like it, they say ;-D

Another great chapter. I enjoy how you flit back and to, from different perspectives, adding a little more depth to the tale each time.

Its powerful, and its interesting.

Well done Cloud. Sit. Have a treat. God boy.

Wow. just wow. Really strong, and powerful emotions there.

I'm guessing this chapter is linked to the erythrophobia one.

Very good, I really love the detached way of writing, as if each chapter is swirling around this little world, without giving too much detail.

perfect