|Reviews for Metathesiophobia|
| Sak chapter 9 . 11/28/2019
Every sentence is so emotive but confusing when there's a change of time with no indication... Even an asterisk would be very good of you to give.
Lani is a cute name
| Sak chapter 8 . 11/28/2019
Omg. That's one way to leave her Cloud!
| Sak chapter 7 . 11/28/2019
Oh this was so good.
His personality comes out so well in a simple list.
Lol about bubble baths and shopping.
| Sak chapter 6 . 11/28/2019
Dann right Cloud wants his ghosts. But I do pity him... His life was too confusing and difficult poor Spike.
And Yuffie.. wow how could such an idiot make such good reasoning as to why she loves a guy?
| Sak chapter 5 . 11/28/2019
He does have those eyes
| tik0 chapter 19 . 2/9/2012
My two favorite characters in ff7, together at last!
Beautifully written by the way. I was hooked from the first sentence and read the whole story in one sitting!
| Sailor Panda chapter 19 . 7/10/2011
I love Cid and Tifa together - enjoyed this lots even with the back and forth in the time stream!
| sakR9 chapter 2 . 5/31/2011
She's wearing a red dress, or she's covered in blood? Checking vitals? Panting? Pulse?
Very confusing, but so enjoyable~
| sakR9 chapter 1 . 12/17/2010
Is there a hidden meaning?
I mean... why hadn't Cid touched her in four years? :o
Why, Cid, whyyyyyyyyyy?
:) Looking forward to reading this.
| JessicaJ chapter 19 . 3/21/2010
I actually looked these up as I read. Helped me to follow the story better!
Excellent story, a pleasure to read
| JessicaJ chapter 18 . 3/21/2010
'I'm going to loose her before I even get the chance to have her.' - beautiful line, but its lose not loose!
Well written, as always. Pregnant sex, hm? Some like it, they say ;-D
| JessicaJ chapter 17 . 3/21/2010
Another great chapter. I enjoy how you flit back and to, from different perspectives, adding a little more depth to the tale each time.
Its powerful, and its interesting.
| JessicaJ chapter 16 . 3/21/2010
Well done Cloud. Sit. Have a treat. God boy.
| JessicaJ chapter 14 . 3/21/2010
Wow. just wow. Really strong, and powerful emotions there.
| JessicaJ chapter 12 . 3/21/2010
I'm guessing this chapter is linked to the erythrophobia one.
Very good, I really love the detached way of writing, as if each chapter is swirling around this little world, without giving too much detail.