Reviews for Collapse
Bahamut.girl chapter 9 . 12/17/2006
What is "IT"? LOL thats funy. This chapter was cute. i like how you ended it. keep up the good work. update soon.

J
katydid13 chapter 9 . 12/17/2006
Very interesting!
necira-skies chapter 9 . 12/17/2006
oh no, she's been released...what a place to end the chapter at...

Please post the next one soon, don't leave us hanging.
nickysbabygirl chapter 9 . 12/17/2006
OMG awesome chapter, please update as soon as possible. I need to know what happens next.
aunttuda chapter 8 . 12/14/2006
love the story so far. can't wait for the rest.
Niki chapter 8 . 12/11/2006
hey dear..

wow..

such a nice story

nice to see

the love between nick and sara

nick was so understanding..

Keep updates Dear!
Mishelle20 chapter 8 . 12/7/2006
I love how Nick handle the nosey neighbor, this was a great update and I can hardly wait for chapter 9.
Lovely-Blossom chapter 8 . 12/1/2006
I really wasn't planning on writing a review (because i have to go out right about... now) but you kinda convinced me with pretty please with snickers on top? SO..

I really liked the last few chapters

the first few chaps were a bit slow..

I lovee snickers so you should definitly continue!

byee
jdcocoagirl chapter 8 . 11/30/2006
its so nice perfect agst... love how you write the emotion of sara and nick without making them so out of character, its very in tune.

update soon.
necira-skies chapter 8 . 11/30/2006
'lovely' neighbor, although how you wrote it, it seemslike she might be back-she seemed to like the idea of Sara working with the police. Good chapter, I'm looking forward to reading the next one when you return-have a good trip
katydid13 chapter 8 . 11/30/2006
Good chapter! I like the backstory you have created for Sara.
panthersrock08 chapter 8 . 11/30/2006
hey luved the story cant wait 4 more chapters.
Call Me Sarah chapter 8 . 11/30/2006
Lol... snickers. Cute. Anyways, love the story! Keep up the UHMAZING work- Sarah Lou (Sarah is actually my name, and people call me Sarah Lou) lol
nickysbabygirl chapter 8 . 11/30/2006
Awesome chapter, I really loved it. Please update soon, I can't wait for more!
Mishelle20 chapter 7 . 11/17/2006
This is an absolutely amazing story so far. I can't wait to read more of it. Please keep up the great work.
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